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a bit absurd/strange environment for the model, and thus interesting.

like it. thanks for sharing

and recognisable :)

I like the idea, but I wish the table was more on it. could be good photo for illustration.

But personally I feel it is a bit too black, in particular the left side which makes the hair less visible than it could be.

Nice portfolio too, by the way.

 

and well done in B&W.

I like the pattern and the light usage.

while the shot definitely captures the couple naturally, I think it is a pitty of the white purse, because that is (to me) really distracting and breaking the picture. Especially because it is on the front, and it is the only white bit. Just my 2 cents of course.

congrats !

good composition, and black&white usage.

While i do think that colors and such are well done, the guy in the kayak is not really breaking the rather typical view, 'because he is not enough lit to make a contrast in the water.

I think that if you would have more focused on him and used the scenery (not so much the sky but rahter the reflection in the water) as a background , it could maybe have been better?

 

Good luck.

the combination of blue and grey is great,terrific shot of beautiful child.

very nice portrait.

what you can/could do with polaroid....i like it alot.

it is so strong black and white, almost too much rhythm, even more like a maze, but it definitely attracts the eye to this picture. Personally i think it is great you don't see her face, she is in a strange, unnatural pose, and making her look to the right creates an expectation , makes me think whether something or someone is to her right, but we don't see it.

So that's nice, intriguing, and personally because of that little story , this picture stands out from the rest of the series, where i don't see more than a body covered in light rays.

nice work,6/6.

good portrait ! Personally i always like pictures that give some kind of story, this one has it. congrats

but slightly over exposed , especially if you look at the fingers and ears, it is a bit too bright. can you try to fix that ?

she is just looking a bit too much outside

unfortunately i miss a bit of context - a bit more of the scene around him could have given more explanation to this man

1)I think that because of the sun right above , the stairs are not really clear to me, making it a bit difficult to see whether he is on a road, or stairs..2) would be better with a bit more context, and the person less central, it 'd still be a strong picture.

this works for me, the obvious star in the windows makes it clear that it is shot from within something. The couple's movement (symmetry) & the composition is just fine.

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i found the composition a bit too central...i think that if she was in the left upper corner, it would even be stronger...then you would have more relief of the rock and her at some height....just my 2 cents...

it maybe better in b/w ?

strong image....