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    Living in danger 2

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    This works as documentary picture. Could be picture in some article in magazine.

     

    Otherwise composition is lacking something. Maybe wan on the right could be cropped out and picture should show more on left side.

     

    But obviously this was taken from car. You can't get everything :)

    Moonpath

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    Moon was low and there was still almost 2 hours to sunrise. I had

    nothing to do when waiting for ship to arrive so I took random shot

    from moon.

     

    Personally I was surprised when I received this slide. I didn't

    expected any success because exposure was made by guessing. I really

    like colors.

    This is cropped from original square slide.

     

    Feel free to critique.

  1. I like colors and general idea, but for composition the leftmost tree could be only partially visible? Small cropping from left.

     

    But that softness and blurriness is too much for me.

     

    Phones are not made for takin photographs ;)

    Before sunrise

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    Is this too dull? How about composition? Originally I wanted to get

    more space around house on the right edge, but it was not possible.

    When taking picture, I was thinking wheter to include house or not.

    But because this was last frame of the film, I decided to include.

    Could this be better if whole house is cropped out creating image more

    vertical than square?

     

    Picture was taken just when sun begins to rise, morning was cold and

    foggy but sky was clear.

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