masiv

I would try a slightly different angle. Try to put the man in the left part of the image, the elbow to touch the frame, and the fence to "flow" to the right, maybe with a little out of focus in far right part. The light is also not at it's best but you can live with it. You can play with it in black&white to obtain a more dramatic effect. You can also try a crop. Cut just obove his head and from his fingers to the left, nothing from his hand to remain in the frame.

In my opinion you have here a correct image but it misses something, "salt and paper". Something to pull it out in front of other images, to attract the viewer and leave the image in his mind. Maybe a different tone, a light effect, brighter red lips, a small tattoo...something. The model seems to be in the middle of the image. This chosen pose gets the best impression with something behind the model to support her. A wall, a door or just the frame. I suggest a crop or two. First of all cut the image just behind her back. You have a great model, very expressive so I would use one more cut, to move the viewers attention on her look, just above the lower arm. It could also look good with the top but nude below the arms line.