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© Copyright Russell Thomas 2014

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Exposure Date: 2014:09:10 21:44:04;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS 5D Mark III;
ExposureTime: 1/160 s;
FNumber: f/11;
ISOSpeedRatings: 100;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/1;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 85 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.5 (Windows);

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© Copyright Russell Thomas 2014

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In my opinion you have here a correct image but it misses something, "salt and paper". Something to pull it out in front of other images, to attract the viewer and leave the image in his mind. Maybe a different tone, a light effect, brighter red lips, a small tattoo...something.

The model seems to be in the middle of the image. This chosen pose gets the best impression with something behind the model to support her. A wall, a door or just the frame. I suggest a crop or two. First of all cut the image just behind her back. You have a great model, very expressive so I would use one more cut, to move the viewers attention on her look, just above the lower arm. It could also look good with the top but nude below the arms line.

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