stephengalea

wonderful magazine photograph....well lite and great emotion..

Well done Elena.

I have nothing to critique.... suberb mood, tree framing and light..

Awesome..

7/7 for me!

Wonderful portfolio Allon...

Suberb Nature, well seen, captured, framed, exposed...

Just everything - AMAZING PHOTOGRAPHS

Thanks a million for such critique..It is greatly appreciated..

I tried croping the bottom, however it seems false in my eyes..

Nicely lite portait...

I find the hand to be sour to the eye here...

would prefer to see image with no hand or at least not croped from the joint...

Other then this...Wonderfull lighting, expression, mood

ALl later mentioned are suberb.

Well done.

Wonderful exposure Dave...Well done and nice lead in to the sun..

Well done

Well I really want to understand wht you had in mind...- is the form of the apple compared to the women?

One thing i find to be overpowering to the eye, is the chair side highlights, maybe flaging the light would have decreased the amount of light.

In addition, i would have eighther croped from the left or else you could not light the left part to attain the viewer focus in the center.

Wht do you think?

nice pose and dramatic tones..

Well done

personally I would not commit myself to say that this is a fashion photography, however these are just my thoughts.

You will get full marks...its wonderfull...

I really like the use of the wide angle here..

amazing shot..

Nicely captured...

One thing, how did you achive a speed of 30000?

I assume its is the duration of the flash?

Nice colors and idea...One thing i would like to suggest is regarding the child..when pasting the child on top of the flower, feather the child slightly, as it seems to have a sharp edge.

Softer edges would increase the probabilty of believe!.

Other then this well done.

As usual - very creative...I think it is the thing in the water..maybe a whale...

wonderful composed..just one small thing is regarding the horizion - I would prefered to see line of the horizon sligtly above the child head..not cutting through.

Wht do you think..

Well done..

Wonderfully though out

I have cropped slightly from the top and bottom..Constructive

critisim is most welcome..

Thanks to all.

Nicely captured abstract shot..

Great exposure and awesome captured mood..A spot on Photo!

Well done!