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nghi_hoang

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    Lotus

          43
    The soft light is amazing, especially in the larger version. I mentally cropped the pod at right, but realized that it has its place.

    Springly

          7

    Hi Emma,

    I like the pastel background and the composition of this photograph. The two white hot spots at the top keep drawing my eyes to them. I would have elected for more DOF to keep the whole flower at lower left corner in focus.

    Fisherman

          4
    Beautiful photograph. I think it can be improved if the reflection in the water didn't get cropped out. Is he fishing for fish? Or is he "fishing" for the green plants?

    Stamen in Pastels

          24
    The out-of-focus filament that lacks the anther leaves something to be desire about this photograph. The pastel colors are quite pleasing. I think the square format is effective.

    Untitled

          7
    This is by far the best of the orchid photographs. The three center flowers in sharp focus in contrast with the diffused ones in the back makes for an interesting sense of depth. I wonder what you did to achieve this. I think the framing of the photograph detracts from the subjects, but this is personal taste. An excellent photograph.

    The Game

          10
    The result of this one game is impossible if the other person played the pieces right. I mentally played it with all the possible permutations (i.e. where the first, second, third, etc. piece was placed) I could think of and not once did it came out this way. Thanks for the mental stimulation.

    Untitled

          12

    This image is technically very good. The child expression is wonderful. She seems to be really into her music and instrument. It's simply wonderful.

     

    However, I think this could be improved. The crop is too tight at the top. A little more space above her head would be nice. The other is the angle at which the camera was placed. The bridge and tip of her nose extend beyond the left contour of her face. Her left eye is obscured. All that could be seen is her eye lashes. This is neither a profile or 3/4 shot. I would prefer to see her left eye and a bit of her other cheek.

     

    These are the reasons I am giving two 6s. I hope this has been constructive.

     

    -Nghi

    Silence

          8
    The depth of field is very nice, so is the diagonal walkway. The light is beautiful and happens to be concentrated where it matters most. Certainly feel the silence.
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