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This image is technically very good. The child expression is wonderful. She seems to be really into her music and instrument. It's simply wonderful.

 

However, I think this could be improved. The crop is too tight at the top. A little more space above her head would be nice. The other is the angle at which the camera was placed. The bridge and tip of her nose extend beyond the left contour of her face. Her left eye is obscured. All that could be seen is her eye lashes. This is neither a profile or 3/4 shot. I would prefer to see her left eye and a bit of her other cheek.

 

These are the reasons I am giving two 6s. I hope this has been constructive.

 

-Nghi

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It's a perfect shot to me. However I see the points of of Nghi (this is constructive feedback). Even than 7/7 for sure.
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