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chris hughes

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    To clarify, I think this crop feels tight for the approach you've chosen. If you wanted to go another way, maybe take it in even tighter and cut out her upper body altogether. It's the contrast between smooth skin and rough wood that's working for me, not the composition or her pose.

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    There's simply nothing going on in this frame... at least to my eye. It kind of screams for a figure or an animal or a flower or... anything but some trees and grass.

    Capetown Mist

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    I like how the textures build through fore, mid and background. Interesting contrast between the little rocks at the front and the great big ones further away. I'd square up the horizon line though.

    eyes

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    I like how you've handled the exposure but the bottle in the mouth kind of ruins it for me. Seems like the image would be cleaner with the mouth visible.

    Untitled

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    Pretty fab exposure for shooting right into the sun. Seems like it might be more interesting if there were a boat out there somewhere though.

    Untitled

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    That black/brown background is kind of bringing the image down. The crop seems too tight too. Maybe focus more on the insect and less on the spider webs?

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    Typically I'd heap an "arty" nude like this with derision but I really like how the textures interact in this one. The crop seems mighty tight and the girl looks really uncomfortable but there's something positive going on here. I wonder how it would work if you focused more on her torso and the wood and less on her arm and face?
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