dougsmiley

January 15, 2007

Crop some from bottom and darken all edges, and this image will look even better.

January 15, 2007

I like this, and I think it could be improved just a bit by cropping the bottom higher up.

January 15, 2007

a hazy day but the IR effect is there

January 11, 2007

the cinder block gives it depth, but is it also distracting?

January 5, 2007

a quick shot with the 70-210

November 29, 2006

I love garlic, and I like this picture, but I find the peeling or whatever from the clove curling up, to be distracting. Colors and basic composition are good.

November 28, 2006

comfortable home & the horn of plenty

November 25, 2006

I like it, but it's a little overexposed.

November 23, 2006

Nice arrangement of shapes. I'm wondering if the jacket draped over the chair adds a discordant note to the composition?

November 23, 2006

A nice still life, elegant in it's simplicity. I would like to see the edges darkened, for an even more striking image.

November 20, 2006

Luscious.

November 20, 2006

Good use of near-to- far elements. Three levels of aerial perpective, plus sky makes for an exciting composition!

November 20, 2006

I'm overwhelmed by this image. Wonderful shapes and muted colors. Nothing static about this picture!

November 19, 2006

It all comes together-the girl, her shadow, the shape of the water. Only two suggestions, Marcelo. Crop the footprint in the lower right? Girl's head lifted up and back, facing the sun?

November 15, 2006

I like it. A good arrangementof elements and a good printing job, too; however the dark reflection in the center (a house?) just below the two white eddies holds my eye too long. I am wondering if it were a bit lighter, would it strengthen the image overall? That, and perhaps to darken the left edge just enough to prevent our eyes from wandering out of the picture? I hope these are helpful suggestions to you, because you have a strong image here.

If your uploaded image is darker than the scanned print, then of course disregard my comments about the center reflection.