rmortenson

May 13, 2004

You need to bring out the details on this.

May 13, 2004

If you could have brightened it a bit it would have brought out the colors - otherwise it really captured the mood.

May 9, 2004

I really agree with Mike. "Rules" like that should be guidelines at most.

May 9, 2004

Clean composition but you are right the tone needs adjusting.

April 17, 2004

Dear William, my critique of the lower left corner was made with the thought that it was ancillary and that it detracts from the image rendering it less than a 6/6 or higher. I understand your opinion but I find it difficult to understand your anger.

April 16, 2004

It feels expansive. Nicely done.

April 16, 2004

I think you should have waited for better lighting.

April 16, 2004

The colors seem a bit muted.

April 16, 2004

The colors seem a bit muted.

April 16, 2004

Sorry but the man is not well defined and the lower left corner needs cropping. Does this really deserve 7/7's and 6/6's ??? I feel there may be a cult of personality here. I like some of your work but some of your 7/7's leave me baffled.

April 10, 2004

try cropping out the upper 25%. It only detracts from the colorful foreground.

April 8, 2004

This really captures "static movement." Great work!

April 3, 2004

Colorful and I like the mood of this.

April 3, 2004

The greens were lost.

February 28, 2004

Let's turn to some people that not only understood color but lived it.

Paul Klee - "Color and I are one."

Andre Derain - Use color "like sticks of dynamite."

Vasily Kandinsky - "Color directly influences the soul. Color is the keyboard, the eyes are the hammers, the soul is the piano with many strings. The artist is the hand that plays, touching one key or another purposively, to cause vibrations in the soul."

February 20, 2004

The boards are distracting

February 18, 2004

I am trying to get a sense of what you commented on about my photo. I think this is the best of the style that you were talking about - i.e. monotone, water, distant shot etc. Both of our shots have a "vague" quality to them but I still am not sure of what you mean.

February 14, 2004

Looks like we were out on the same day. Clouds and light - wonderful.

February 13, 2004

Isolate your subject and it would improve the shot.

January 30, 2004

An insightful photograph - full of warmth. I would have liked to have seen just a bit more detail in the face though.

January 24, 2004

More clarity would have really changed this wonderful shot. Great just the way it is.

January 24, 2004

I think the bottom darkens out too quickly and the image is lost somewhat.

January 24, 2004

Off center and out of focus

January 10, 2004

I understand the limitations but it would have been nice to have been able to increase the depth of field so that the bricks were in focus. Almost there.

January 10, 2004

Kind of looks like a snapshot. Maybe if you would have isolated an individual in an interesting pose it would have helped. Otherwise it is merely a look and shoot photo.

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