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    A Climbing Lizard

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    Very sharp, which is especially surprising since you were panning the camera. In the Large view, I see a thin diagonal line going from the lizard's nose to the right of the image - you might want to clone that out.

    Untitled

          14

    Lovely model, nice photo.

    The black in the corners of her eyes and mouth looks a little strange to me (did you edit something here?) and the whole photo seems a bit soft.

    Untitled

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    Are you sure this image is not manipulated, as you indicate in the information?

     

    You had a photo of one window and copied it three times and changed the colours, and the middle one is mirrored, so that the shadow is in the wrong direction. Clearly a composited, manipulated image.

    bgu

          4

    Good photo, very erotic!

     

    The JPEG compression is too much, JPEG compression artifacts (blocks etc.) are easily visible - that ruins the quality of the photo a bit. Don't use such a low JPEG quality setting...

     

    Untitled

          14

    Good photo, nice framing with the cave. I think the tattoo on her belly is distracting (it draws too much attention). Also you can see tan lines from her swim suit, maybe you'd want to edit that away a little bit.

     

    Untitled

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    Nice photo, good lighting, nice body, but why cut the head off like that? I've seen more photos with heads cut off like that. It's not an original idea anymore and I don't like it.

    Untitled

          2

    I find the composition confusing. According to your description you wanted to show the reflection, but the shop sign is attracting so much attention that by just looking at the photo I didn't understand what you wanted to show here.

     

  1. Amazing that it's so incredibly sharp, especially considering that the available light was probably not very strong. I would have liked this photo more if Willie was a bit more to the left; now there's a lot of black space behind him. You could crop off a bit of the space on the left. Also it's a pity that the head and the bottom of the guitar are cut off.

     

    A butterfly

          4

    Absolutely beautiful colours; the pastel blue background contrasts very nicely with the orange of the flower and the butterfly. I also like the orange border, it fits perfectly to this photo.

     

    Tanja

          11

    The image is quite dark, which makes it a bit dull. If there would have been more contrast in it (for example, make the white in the eyes much whiter), the eyes would capture the attention more.

     

    To explain what I mean: In the place where I'm doing a photography course, there's also a photo with almost the same subject on the wall. On that photo, there's a beam of light coming from the side going over the eyes. The attention is immediately drawn to the eyes, which makes it a much more impressive photo than yours.

     

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