ken_thalheimer 3,739 Posted May 1, 2003 Very nicely done. Great eyes. One can see the intensity in her face though much of her face is hidden. Toning works well also Link to comment
jespdj 0 Posted May 1, 2003 The image is quite dark, which makes it a bit dull. If there would have been more contrast in it (for example, make the white in the eyes much whiter), the eyes would capture the attention more. To explain what I mean: In the place where I'm doing a photography course, there's also a photo with almost the same subject on the wall. On that photo, there's a beam of light coming from the side going over the eyes. The attention is immediately drawn to the eyes, which makes it a much more impressive photo than yours. Link to comment
bird_on_a_wire 0 Posted May 2, 2003 It's a phantastique portrait. Nice lady and perfect craftmansship! Link to comment
joy 0 Posted May 4, 2003 Good photograph. But, lighting is very flat and so, can look a bit drab. More light on/around the eyes might make a difference. Link to comment
Recommended Comments
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now