Jump to content

jon_fernquest

Members
  • Posts

    555
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Image Comments posted by jon_fernquest

  1. I like shots under the hot midday sun done in grey. I tried this once on a shot of street workers in sand. For me the grey out is kind of visually analogous to the way intense sun like this makes you squint and not see clearly.
  2. Does makes me feel very uneasy. Reminds me of photos of bodies piled up at Auschwitz. A reminder of mortality. The graininess is effective. The head in the upper left corner that's looking straight out and the one to the left leaning on it seem to make the composition as center points.

    Untitled

          4

    Love the horizontals in this one. The tiny little vertical wire and the huge undulating hump of that yellow whale, also cool.

     

    > Great colours, but I keeep

    > wondering what lies just outside the frame.

     

    I'd be surprised if that wasn't what he was trying to get you to do.

     

    I find it interesting that everyone always gives you such low ratings. Composition is said lie in subtracting away the inessential and you do this wonderfully and consistently in every piece, leaving the viewer with a raw, elemental juxtaposition of colored surfaces.

     

    I find this approach and the consistent way you apply it refreshing, so I almost always give it a 7. Nobody ever seems to explain their 3's and 4's. I suppose this means they just don't understand what you are trying to do.

    Pierside, 2003

          7
    Beautiful reflection, color, and mystery! You can barely make out what's happening (which adds themystery) but it looks like they are standing, faceing a Japanese style gate that towers before them.

    Untitled

          3

     

    The more muted colors, especially the

    yellow is a nice variation on

    the previous brighter yellows and the sack has

    a lot more texture and less specular reflection

    than the plastic did.

     

    Like the way the folds and the cropping conceal

    the text partially. Your experimenting with

    different materials like this is inspiring.

×
×
  • Create New...