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tony bell

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  1. Mah sister is COVERED in MOLES.......

     

    Now really, I like this. It is very sharp and very well exposed. On the one hand, the blue vase in the painting is somewhat distracting and on the other it sure sets off the model's wonderfully blue eyes so I guess I'd call the vase a plus. The items behind her lower in the frame are another matter. They are quite distracting and serve no purpose. Very nice.

    Vampire.

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    It seems soft, but that might be attributable to the texture you've laid over the top of this. I REALLY don't care for it at all (the texture).

    little girl

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    After looking at this some more, I'd also look at cropping down from the top to the tops of the peoples' heads in the background to cut out some of that brightness in the far background.

    boiled in time

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    It may just be me but the pole and clock seem just a little crowded. Maybe a little more room on the left side? Just my opinion. Very interesting photo!

    Deep Inside

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    This is very interesting indeed. It looks as if you may have intentionally tried to NOT make anything level in this, which is fine if that is the case but I will say that looking at it I just feel like the white line running all the way across the frame should act as the "horizon" for this shot and I would consider rotating it to the right and see what it looks like. In any case, nice shot!

    little girl

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    First, you need a better scan. Second, I'd crop this from the left side and more or less cut the man in blue in half down the middle so as to cut the bright circular object sitting on top of this right shoulder, it is very distracting. Nice street shot of an intense looking young girl!
  2. Nice composition. It may very well be the monitor I am using but to me, too much of his face is in shadow. I think I'd like it better if the light source was moved just a bit around towards the front of his face and put about half in shadow and half not, but then that's just my opinion! ;) Nice work!

    elise in a bench

          5
    There are some very good points about this shot. It is well composed IMO and the colors are diverse and wonderful. The subject matter is very attractive and therefore pleasing to view. I like very much the DOF and I particularly like the way you have caught the left bench end in silhuette. It makes it very different. Now, a couple of things that might be improved on, IMO only of course. The background sky seems pretty blown out to me. Her hair almost disappears into it. Her skirt is also very bright. The other thing that bothers me is the bi-directional lighting, the lighting from above (presumably from the sun) and the front lighting. It creates shadows from multiple angles which disturb me when looking at it, particularly the shadow created by her shoulder and arm against the bench. This may not bother anyone else at all but that's my 2 cents. Overall though this is a very fine effort and a good photo. Keep shooting!

    Heart of a Champion

          5
    This is a nice capture, good moment, well composed. It is somewhat overexposed but other than that, a pretty nice shot. Thanks so much for your helpful constructive comments that you left on my church steeple photo that you deemed fit for a 2/2 rating. Very helpful.
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