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minh_thai

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    Untitled

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    I can't pin point it, but somehow the crop looks a bit awkward to me. Maybe, it's the direction of the model's eyes that leads to something not included in the frame.

    Lighting SUCCESS

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    Low and single-sourced light accentuates the features of the model's face and body, giving a dramatic look. I like the tight crop where the shadow from the neck vein and clavicle, as well as the brassiere straps are very prominent. Poster on the background is questionable though. Regards.

    Geometry

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    The shadow from the adjacent building ruins this composition I think. I would crop a bit lower to bring the space btw the feet of the rail and the shadow to the middle of the picture.

    Metal Bowl

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    Maybe is the JPEG artifacts, but the shadow looks artificial to me. I like the composition, but may be a top spot light will bring out the (black) pot a little more?
  1. I'm a bit struggle w/ the setup here. If you want to include your daughter to give a comparison between her age (hence youthfulness) and the ruin's age, I would position her more dominantly in the picture. As it is I can barely recorgnize that there is a little girl on the stair. Regards. M

    Balerina

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    While I love the high key composition, I'm sure how I feel about the pose. It just seems to me that too much has been omitted to get the face dominant in the frame. In addition, the right hand side appears to be quite a bit darker, and has little blue cast on it. Very nice picture regardless!
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