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My daughter asked me to shoot some portraits of her when she turned

13 (4 years ago now). I snapped this picture before she actually

posed for a shot, and I liked this one better than the "canned" pose

that followed. Might benefit from some cropping at the top? Other

thoughts?

I can't pin point it, but somehow the crop looks a bit awkward to me. Maybe, it's the direction of the model's eyes that leads to something not included in the frame.