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stanley_rogouski

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  1. Criticisms.

     

    Frame's too thick.

     

    You should either leave out the church on the right or give it more space in the photo.

     

    I see what you're trying to do, but if you're trying to contrast the dilapidated building on the left with something less dilapidated, you shouldn't set up the photo so that the building on the left overwhelms everthing else.

    North Pier

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    Looks almost like Seaside Park in NJ.

     

    I'd be interested in seeing it from another angle, specifically about 20 degrees clockwise from this. That way you might capture more of a sweeping effect. If there's an angle where you can make the water and pier look as if they're moving together out to sea, it would look excellent.

    Winter Night

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    Very evocative of the kind of snowy day I used to see in parts of Maine.

     

    The one thing I'd like to see is some kind of, I don't know, "heaviness" to the sky.

     

    I don't know quite how to phrase it, but maybe the fact that I thought of it means it's suggested anyway.

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