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david_eppstein

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    The impression I get from this photo is: he's standing straight, it's the rest of the world that's tilted. If that's what you intended, good job, otherwise fix the horizon.

    Deco Beach

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    Very much conveys the flavor of Miami Beach. The seams between the components are a little disconcerting -- it might be interesting to try sewing these together into a panorama instead.

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    I don't think all the black adds much to the photo. I don't see much in the way of fish or other subjects, it's all background decoration. Lighting is ok but I think it would have been better if possible to avoid the reflections off the back wall. Maybe it would work better at a larger size?
  1. The cut off roof, the centered composition, the big blank sky, combine to give a deliberately artless effect. I guess it also goes with the flat scenery but I'm somewhat baffled by this one.

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    Muddled. Foreground contrasty and hard to make out, with little apparent connection to blurred background. Light/dark omposition leads eye to brightest foreground patch, bottom center, where nothing much is happening.
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