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    Nilesh,

     

    VERY nice subject! I like the texture of the sand.

     

    Just curious if you used a tripod. If not, I'd strongly recommend it. You will be able to use smaller apertures (and greater depth of field) as well as try out different compostions.

     

    just my 4-anna!

     

    :)

     

    Ajoy

    Untitled

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    THIS one is certainly your finest work in your portfolio (in my opnion!) If this is a newer one, I can clearly see a marked improvement in your work.

     

    : )

    Ajoy

  1. One of your best images. Although, I'd hate to see them being seen as 'natives' and others walking by gawking at them. So, I took the liberty of changing the mood a bit by (what else?) cropping a bit. See if you like it.

     

    just my 4-anna's worth!

     

    :)

     

    Ajoy

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  2. One of your finest images! I was thinking that it is a bit too red, but then again, what in Matheran isn't? :)

     

    I esp. love the expression in the younger kids eyes. Keep it up!

     

    Ajoy

     

     

  3. I concur. The best thing I would do to this one is to open up the shadows a bit...but I am not sure it is even needed!

     

    Some things you can't do much about post-click. e.g. the boys elbow at the adge of the frame. My 2-cents is that you should try and get it right the first time, else you will get frustrated when you find that P/S is not a panacea! Sorry.

     

    Else, the image is VERY good. Don't do much to it! :)

     

    Ajoy

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    One of your best images! I do like the image of the eye too, but I think this one conveys a lot more than others. Only issue is the tonality that could be improved a bit, otherwise, creativity and vision come wonderfully together here. All the best!

     

    :)

     

    Ajoy

  4. Avneesh,

     

    Certinly one of your best shots! This one tells me that you have the capability and the techniques right.

     

    I'd shoot and practise the art if you will more. Try and look up books on composition and play with the DOF using the aperture more than you have.

     

    :)

     

    Ajoy

    In Detroit

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    Akshaya,

     

    Of all the images, I think this one (self I assume?) I find the most balanced. I find it a useful excercise to look at good images and see why they work. Look at this one- simple, good bokeh, no distractive elements.

     

    Many of your iamges have a great potential and I'd highly, very highly recommend that you invest in a tripod and pull the camera out of the program mode and start using smaller apertures (for landscapes and closeups). Look up tips if you like on my site http://www.ajoyprabhu.com/album/photo-tips.html.

     

     

    The critical thing is to have an 'eye' for good images which you have. Rest follows... :)

     

    Majhe 4-anne.

     

    :)

     

    Ajoy

     

     

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    Ashish, Just remember one simple rule- As soon as you 'digitize' you will lose some sharpness. I sharpen just a bit (50% w/ radius 3) for the screen (prints get sharpened based upon thier final size). Hope that that helps! :)

    Here is my attempt (using Irfan View)

     

    Ajoy

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    Untitled

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    Very nice shot. WONDERFUL lighting. However, the buildig on the right distrats a bit (short of 'photoshopping' it out, which I'd never do!) I'd only suggest sharpening the image (bet the original is better than the scan!

     

    :)

     

    Ajoy

    Mossy old backyard

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    Dipankar,

     

    The image resonates beautiful with me. Can imagine being in my parents native village!

     

    Just my take on the composition is that even with what you have, there is a lot and (Dave is right) the wall is indeed not adding anything to it. I'd crop it like so (attached) and try and open the shadows a bit.

     

    Just my 4-anna! :)

     

    Ajoy

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