toni_paloheimo

Very simple, very effective! The colour is marvellous (even though my laptop's screen doesn't surely do any justice to it ;o)

I would probably also get rid of some of the dark foreground. Otherwise I find the photo very, very pleasing!

I like the simplicity of this photo. The colors are harmonic and the woman's very simple pose fits well into the photo. I also like the center composition. Overall, a photo I could stare for a long time!

I think the photo really works! You have been able to catch the situation very lively.

The man in his suit coming out from the joint with warm rolls in the paper bag and on the

other hand the man outside warming up his cold hands wishing he could switch places with

the other man... And thats not all! It is really a photo that one could "read" for a long

time.

It poses a question: "Where is she driving with the smile on her face?"

First I thought that the boy was catching a ball. Closer look revealed that the "ball"

is actually a clock or some other round object on the wall. After noticing that it came

somewhat distracting and I would have probably cropped the photo from the top. This would

have also given the boy bit more attention and would probably quide the viewers eye more

from boy to girl than from boy to "ball". It would have probably broken also the

"center weighted" composition of the photo. Generally a very nice light! What does

the light area under the boys right hand come from? It is bit distracting too.

I like the almost b&w feeling of the shot.

The separate branches on the left are distracting.

I would probably crop the photo bit from the bottom.

I would probably crop the photo from the left bit. The dark area there makes the photo little unbalanced.

I like the drawing-like feeling of this photo. Nice work!

To my eye the end of the staircase is bit too dark.

The flower could be off center for a better composition but the background is a bigger problem. It is too distracting. Maybe you could have tried a different angle so that the gray wall on the right would have worked as a background.

The soft light is nice! The "glowing" paper, paper silhouette, model's left hand, hair, sofas...

Very nice use of white! Too bad the center is a bit washed out...

Potential for a very nice photo! Crop the photo tighter towards the man and - voila.