chjohnson 0 Posted August 10, 2001 The only thing missing from this photo is more contrast. I love the positioning of the bird in the foreground and the person on the dock. Link to comment
mark_a 0 Posted August 10, 2001 My opinion is "chase the duck". The child on the dock would have been my focus. I like the overall composition and the idea of the photo. Link to comment
jeff callen 0 Posted August 11, 2001 I like the way the duck seems to be philosophically looking at the kid standing in the distance... as if the duck is really a higher life form from annother planet sent here to look stupid yet really observe us all and you've caught the duck in a moment when it finally becomes obvious. The scale, where the duck is larger is a niice way to draw my eye to this sort of randomly strange thought, rather than a more post-card-like image, you've created a narrative of the mind, which I find a more risky, but more interesting proposition. Link to comment
matteo-delgrosso 0 Posted August 11, 2001 Looks like a great opportunity, but the composition is not pleasing. It should be more to the right and the foreground is too dark. Link to comment
tomas_roztocil 0 Posted August 17, 2001 nice shot, to even improve it I would remove part of the bottom of the image (foreground) to get rid if the unnecessarily large dark area that does not bring much to the picture Link to comment
toni_paloheimo 0 Posted August 23, 2001 I would probably also get rid of some of the dark foreground. Otherwise I find the photo very, very pleasing! Link to comment
alex_robinson 0 Posted August 23, 2001 I like the duck - strangely surreal. Without it the photo would be pretty but less individual. Link to comment
ed_berman6 0 Posted August 23, 2001 Isn't it the second time you post this picture for critique? What was wrong with the first round of responses? They were in line with the current crop. Link to comment
squirrelman 0 Posted January 19, 2002 I think this is one of your better photos and I like the composition the way it is -- with the duck! IMHO, it deserves highers ratings than it got. I believe I also understand why you did not add more contrast -- the mood is better preserved with softer lighting. Finally, I wonder if folks realize that those are two rather large volcanoes in the background!! Link to comment
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