lizweisiger 0 Posted May 16, 2007 I think her face is perfect and the red colored hair is good; I just can't get past the style of it. Link to comment
artyanto 0 Posted May 16, 2007 great pic...great colours..a real image with the power of a real face and a real look.. 7/7 Link to comment
juan carlos rivera 0 Posted May 16, 2007 Very nice. Beautiful model very well captured. Sincere congrats. Link to comment
pmj 6 Posted July 14, 2008 Please note the following: This image has been selected for discussion. It is not necessarily the "best" picture the Elves have seen this week, nor is it a contest. Discussion of photo.net policy, including the choice of Photograph of the Week should not take place here, but in the href="/bboard/forum?topic_id=1562">Site Feedback forum. The About Photograph of the Week page tells you more about this feature of photo.net. Before writing a contribution to this thread, please consider our reason for having this forum: to help people learn about photography. Visitors have browsed the gallery, found a few striking images and want to know things like why is it a good picture, why does it work? Or, indeed, why doesn't it work, or how could it be improved? Try to answer such questions with your contribution. Link to comment
will king 0 Posted July 14, 2008 I like the tones in this. The burnt orange in her hair is well contrasted with the earthy greens in the bg. I do feel that a 15% crop off of the left would benefit the composition and eliminate the tree that seems to be competing with her eyes. Link to comment
tomadakis 0 Posted July 14, 2008 It gives me the feeling of some "I don't want to talk about it" trouble. Emphasized by the blank stare, the tilting head against the wood or stone. It is most interesting that the stone seems to be also tilted against her symbolizing the unknown trouble...Beautiful tone, detail and focus. Link to comment
tomadakis 0 Posted July 14, 2008 It gives me the feeling of some "I don't want to talk about it" trouble. Emphasized by the blank stare, the tilting head against the wood or stone. It is most interesting that the stone seems to be also tilted against her symbolizing the unknown trouble...Beautiful tone, detail and focus. Link to comment
silverdae 0 Posted July 14, 2008 Words that pop to mind are elf, nymph, fairy... not so much trouble. I love the simplicity of the composition- it leasves room for the "action" her hair brings to the image. Great capture. To me it looks like her skin is a little on the green side. Check the fleshtones, but it could just be me. Link to comment
haleh b 0 Posted July 14, 2008 An 'honestly' beautiful image! No distractions, excessive makeup, unnecessary additives....this is just beyond all of that! Link to comment
ericm1 0 Posted July 14, 2008 Great picture. For some reason I can't stop looking at her lips, they stick out to me but I don't know why. Link to comment
atlatling 4 Posted July 14, 2008 Will King above, has the idea. This photograph needs some cropping. I agree with his assessment that 15 percent needs to come off the left side. Eliminate that wood or tree or fence post or whatever it is. I also would either crop the bottom halfway to the subject's chin. Or darken the bright red of the girls coller. Either way, it would stop competing with the rest of the beautiful photograph. My congratulations on a fine photograph, lovely subject (even with strange hair), and for being chosen as this weeks POW. Willie the Cropper Link to comment
doctorbabaguy 0 Posted July 15, 2008 I agree with those who suggested the crop. But by doing so I find that the model's hair interferes with her eyes and her face. This I think is serious because removing one 'interference' leads to another somewhat unimportant element becoming important...a sign that perhaps quite a different approach would have been better for this subject whose eyes, freckles, lips and hair all vie for attention. IMHO, a wider focal length, perhaps a 50mm or a 85mm from a 'middle' distance, with more of her head and hair but also her neck and shoulders to balance her hair, would have been a better decision such that in sum her eyes, here the most important element, win over. Just my 2 cents. Link to comment
juan_su 0 Posted July 15, 2008 Great shot. What grabs me first about this shot is her hair but as I look inside I get an opening to her eyes. I can see why the need for the tree on the left as a frame, but cropping a bit more would help. Good job! Link to comment
paula grenside 0 Posted July 15, 2008 I like the simplicity of her look contrasted with the depth of her eyes. To me, the portrait works as it is with her head slightly leaning against the tree. Really a very good portrait. Link to comment
ken_thalheimer 3,739 Posted July 15, 2008 Excellent. There's a lot of depth to the portrait Link to comment
photo_dark 1 Posted July 15, 2008 It is certainly a good image... depth of field is about perfect, but i'm still not convinced that it's a 'great' image. maybe it's just me, but it feels like the (viewer's left) eye is distracting, almost as if she's not completely looking at the camera... Probably an optical illusion, but throws me a bit. Aside from that, a very nice portrait no doubt. Link to comment
stamos 1 Posted July 15, 2008 I wouldn't crop out the tree. The tree is part of the "story" as the head bends slightly and tenderly. The DOF is practically perfect and the expression very interesting. A great portrait in my opinion. Link to comment
davidmackenzie 0 Posted July 15, 2008 I agree, that there is a "been there" look to her expression. I also like the contrast of the rough hair and smooth skin as well as the mostly vertical composition broken by the two diagonal strands. The image draws you... Link to comment
gsphotoguy 3 Posted July 15, 2008 I also feel there is much to like about this portrait. I like the way the hair frames her face. The colors really contribute without being too saturated. My only issue is the uneven light on her eyes. Her right eye really pops but he left is dull. I feel they either need to be even or very different. I really like her expression. Link to comment
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