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Of course, red provides impact, the photo is technically well done and the composition is extremely good. I would have misted the entire flower or left the two drops out; other than that it's great.
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I really like the colors and the exposure is very good. I think that there is just too much to look at and that the branch is not necessary as the shadows alone lead the eye to the third mushroom. I find the branch distracting.
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I like the composition. Usually with flowers I would prefer to see vertical format but because of the fanned arrangement it works horizontally. If the background were darker the clover would stand out more. I played with this in Photo Deluxe and decreased the brightness (-27) and increased contrast (+44)and it really looked super.
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Nice exposure and fair composition. I would crop about 1/2 inch off the left and crop the top down to just below the bright spot on the right stem. This would get the flower close to the third spot and eliminate the distracting bright spots at the top. The flower is now the brightest area and is the focus of attention with all lines in the picture leading to it.
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Very nice shot of the main flower. I would have rated it higher aesthetically if the leaves behind it were toned down because they detract from the subject. -
I don't agree with the first comment. I think the subject is well placed and the foreground, which looks natural, adds to the image by providing locale info. Nice colors. -
This is very nice. It is well composed and technically well done.
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I like the shades of blue. However, the image lacks a center of interest like a fishing boat or some interesting foreground feature. I had this same problem when I was at the beach at Pattaya many years ago - nice sunset but.....
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Great impact; the colors are fabulous. Exposure is very good and the composition, considering the subject matter, is well done.
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I am by no means a pro but I will comment based on things I have learned from others. The depth of field is quite good, keeping the subject well focused while the background is out of focus. With flower shots like this, it would be best to shoot in a vertical format, thereby eliminating much of the uninteresting background. Your subject should take up at least 3/4 of the frame. The colors are nice but I think a little less exposure would have given richer colors. Try this again if possible. You might also swing the camera slightly so the stem comes diagonally from a lower corner. One more thing, the faded bloom (upper right) is distracting and should have been removed or the angle changed to obscure it. This would leave three blossoms (we humans like the "symmetry" of odd numbers.)I hope these comments are helpful.
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Nicely composed and good impact with the white against the dark blue. Could have underexposed a little to have retained more detail in the white area.
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Nice blending of the shapes. The composition is very good, the colors are true and it is technically well done. -
Quite an interesting shot. I never wouild have thought to take it. Nice job. -
Just happened back to this image and saw your response to my earlier comment. Thanks for the explanation - very interesting.
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Very dramatic. Nice composition, great color impact and technically well done.
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Very nice composition with just the right amouint of sky. I like the curved lines of the water on the beach and the colors are very pleasing.
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Nice portrait of a cute kid. The plaid background is a little distracting; try again with plain backdrop - the subject is great and I'm sure you can't get enough pictures of that guy. -
Nice composition and those red roofs are great. A polarizer would have made this more powerful by darkening the bland sky and making the reds and whites stand out. The sun's direction was good for polarization.
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Great color and nice composition. Technically well done. -
Well composed and technically well done.
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Nice mood shot but lacks a real center of interest. -
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