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thomas_m_duffy

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          8

    Love the Colors!!

    Maybe if those clouds were higher, I would enjoy the composition more.

    Cool shot though!!   I would hang that up

    SMP_7395a copy

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        I like the lighting, model looks good. Maybe a little more fill light on the right sideof the face.

    I'm gonna give you a very rare critique for a pic like this.

          I'm a Japanese sword instructor of 10+years. The position of the  sword from a combative point of view looks at best amature.

        Looks like he's displaying a block. His right side of his head would been injured. And he's "giving away his right arm for a strike. His arm does look cool in the shot though.

         Now I know this critique probably means nothing to 99% of the folks here, and the photograph you took looks fantastic.

       however if you plan on taking more photos with bladed weapons you may or may not want to look up pics of sword positions. It could make for a more authentic model appearance.

        The combative position that is closest to your model's from my point of view is one called in Japanese. "hasso no kamae:

    (and I do know that's not a Japanese sword, however every culture had/has pretty much the same fundamentals. )

    again, great photo, just thought I'd chime in with a unique critique for ya!

    Tom

    crest

          5

    Great DOF. good job with the wide lens. I think because the top structures seem more interesting than the closer stones, you have your doubts.

         Maybe turn the camera and incorparate more of those nice top structures while still keeping that nice wide focal length and just forget about the stones at the bottom?

    Nice pic though

    river

          5

    What I like about this photo. It's not a typical waterfall pic. As there is more waterfalls in the background. Perfect composition and excellent exposure time. It's obvious a lot of time went into this photograph.

    Well Done!

    Corinna

          10

    Stunning capture.  If I was to try to find something, maybe a better look at one of the heels for the foot folks

     

    Great photograph!

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