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rjacksonphoto

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  1. Great shot.  Although you see a lot of mirror shots, this one, including only her eye, grabs the viewer's attention.  The absence of other people on a day when, normally, they are all around, accentuates the sense of seriousness and introspection.  It's almost as if she is saying, "You do know what you are about to do, right?"  Reminds me of the look on the faces of Dustin Hoffman and Katharine Ross in the last scene of The Graduate, when they are sitting at the back of the bus.

    Paris 8

          13
    This looks like a composite. The lighting of the clouds does not seem to match the directional light on the buildings. Looking at the large version, the clouds continue straight to the horizon and even appear to overlap the distant buildings. Am I right?

    Untitled

          11
    Well, it's been done before, but rarely this well. The OOF pinks in the background set this apart from other, similar shots, which usually have blue sky backgrounds. Lovely!

    Autumnal composition

          11
    Very attractive shot, although most of the major compositional elements seem to signify death (the dead tree in the foreground and the dead conifers in the background-- interesting, because even approaching winter should not turn these evergreens brown). The dramatic lighting and use of a polarizer work well here. Nice job, just wonder if this doesn't say more than just "look at me, I'm pretty".

    childhood-04

          11
    This looks like a composite. Is that green smoke in the trees? Something about the light doesn't look natural.The foreground light is directional but without shadows from the boys. The background has the murky look of predawn or green smoke. Also, the action of the boys doesn't seem like it goes together. Would not the boy on the far left have had to just cross paths with the two boys on the right without colliding? Or, did all of the boys suddenly spring into a run from the locations at which they were captured here, kites already aloft? One more thing, the green light in the background seems to stop short of the bases of the trunks of the trees on the right. Hmmm...

    mirror in shadow

          11
    Sure, it's been done. But I like the use of contrast to highlight the graphic nature of the image and the distortions created by displaying it inverted like this. Good job. Cropping off the shadow of the people would stress the graphic nature but lose much of the context. I think I like it the way it is.
  2. Wow, is the choice of carpet color designed to keep passengers above decks? Some sensors seem to have difficulty with blue, rendering too purple (I've had that problem with Nikon). What did you use?

    The Curve.

          9
    I don't know. I find the lighting confusing. Are those supposed to be reflections on wet concrete? The way the shadows (or reflections) merge with the shadow on the side of the building doesn't seem to make sense. I feel like I'm looking through the dirty windshield of a car. I like the composition except for the blank area in the lower right corner. Was there something there you were covering up with the post-processing?

    Gaudì warriors

          2
    Well done. I like how you've excluded unnecessary graphic elements. The stair rail on the right bothers me just a little but would have been hard to exclude. I guess you could back up and get more of it in, but then you risk losing the simplicity of the composition. Tough call. It's good as is.

    alnmouth beach

          14
    Nice shot but I wish the contrail were not there. Also, raising the camera position slightly would have afforded a better view of the ocean and prevented the horizon from intersecting the posts. Also, might have positioned the large post in the foreground a little more to the left. This would have placed it in the sweet spot according to the rule of thirds, eliminating the dead space in the lower left corner. Also would have moved it away from the confluence of clouds, which right now lies behind the post... Tonal scale is good and an excellent choice of subject.
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