joshuasigar
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Wow, the green is a good complement and makes the image. Good choice of section of the mountain range, too.
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I see the lines you saw!
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The balance of various shapes, lines, and lights is just pleasing. Good eye.
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Everything looks good except that it's too symmetrical for me. The two peaks may not be of the same height but as a whole it looks symmetrical left and right. And then horizontally, I see dark section at the bottom and bright section at the top--another symmetry pretty much.
See my crop. Now the darker area occupies about bottom one third. That framing change alone will probably make me happy. But the vertical symmetry is still not ideal for me. So I cropped so that I isolated the peaks that way the height difference is more obvious and we lost symmetry.
Note that I'm not against symmetrical composition. I just thought it doesn't work for this particular photo.
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What Iftikhar Ahmad said.
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Perfect framing and pose.
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Everything (composition, timing, exposure) looks perfect to me.
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I'm not fond of the centered horizon in this case. I would crop it as attached.
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Good placement of the plane. I wish there had been more clouds on the left because it currently looks unbalanced.
I would try a slower shutter speed to get less frozen propellers.
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The trail sign post would probably make the photo if it said anything interesting, otherwise I would just include a natural object.
The light in the sky that forms bands looks fantastic.
I feel the top portion is wasted. I would try to exclude most of it. Using the existing photo, I would do a square crop and take the lower portion of the existing photo.
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1. I would try not to include the leftmost boat because it doesn't look consistent with the other two. The leftmost looks like a modern boat (whatever you call it, you know, one with engine).
2. The emptiness around the boats doesn't appeal to my eyes. I would put the bottommost boat to lower right, probably by dipping myself into water to get closer and make the bottommost boat a strong foreground. Or maybe top left, as attached.
Zhangjiajie Forest Park
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I'd say you need to find a better foreground. The one you have is, hmm, messy. Probably something with simpler shape will do better. A foreground object on top right, instead of the current position, will balance the image better. Or if I could only work with this existing image, I'll crop it as attached--better balance and I can actually use the existing foreground.