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lech1

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    Mono Lake

          31

    here is the huge amount of unreal clouds and nonsense rocks. I extracted some fragment and now I start see the stone which lasts long, the tree which dies, the space which is eternal and the cloud which is here for the second

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    Summer portrait

          83

    This photo is not set up. Light is not arranged. Model does not work for hours and she is not a little girl. After the photo was executed it was not heavily PS manipulated. It is not a quasi pro photo. So it is not a standard POW. Moreover the models face does express something and this expression matches womens genotype. It is a good photo.

    Out the Window

          87

    I do not feel transmission of a little sorrow of this little girl. Sometimes girls look out of window but the light flux is limited by window frame. These defects spoil the 'soul'. We have details available instead. It seems to me that we have professional approach here and the professional outcome. So the picture is 'beautiful' but lacks power.

    Untitled

          39

    The pattern on the board bottom does not turn along with the  body twist. This can be observed in the two central shots.  Moreover the  bottom of board is not in shadow as it should be. This photo is a joke I do not accept.

  1. There is a nice girl who was asked to pose at the side of a drain lit in a sentimental mood. It takes time to complete many expositions. I would rather ask the old man with donkey to pose here. Frankly speaking I can hardly see any sense in this creation and the outcome is IMO the failure.

    Masai

          43

    The person who does not support himself with stick speaks. I guess he is a spokesman of the two women to the right or he is prosecutor/defensor. I guess that we see a serious event and the group will take decisions. I would crop this photo to the aspect ratio Last Supper-like to focus attention on the plot.

    Old Movie...

          73

    It is an old Russian habit (I adopted and cherish very much) to sit down for a while before a long journey and think again if everything is done right. I suppose that this is the meaning of this picture.

    Retezat Mood

          54

    I would go 20m ahead and 40m to the right. I would like to see the bright and dark sides of this mountain leading to the main chain.  IMO more than 50% of the photo area is lost.

    talksII

          91

    Thre are no waves on the surface and the girl has elaborated make up. This is the set up photo. It is to explicit. Pls consider modification below I add to hide these circumstances.

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    Factory-girl

          78

    I remember  Ruth and  Liz of famous Martin. Liz was factory girl and had cheap make up and dress. Despite her warm personality and fine body she had no future.

  2. The horror is documented here. The place is ugly and extremly dirty - frankly speaking it is the sanitary scandal. Model has the indifferent butchers face, the face of a person who  kills without hesitation. It is funny to hear about composition and other esthetic circumstances from persons who 'love' this photo.

    This is a sad photo of great value.

    Dreams

          84

    I do not find dreams in this photo. I think that it evokes the peculiar sensing of space. Walls constitute psychological barriers which prevent observer to dream about following the jet track. This is strange but I am sure that the shadow is made of  huge cartoon already inserted from the right side.

    Untitled

          69

    This is a magic moment with rain and sun rays. It is no chance for rainbow in the city. We have people instead. Under the small roof they tend to integrate. Here this situation is not spotted. The women has nice shoulders, a big nose and fresh hair. The other is better equipped and probably provides better. I can not image painting about rain which is  better than this photo.

  3. Humidity does not attenuate IR light so the air perspective is missing. In this way the space is contracted. Here the impression may arise that the ball will fly far away for this same reason. Composition is not perfect because the  golfer shadow head is cut.

    Rainforest Canyon

          86

    Water is a series of crystal sparkling events not a pudding.  Time passing can be sensed when one looks at water. Here time is not captured and nothing is to remember so this picture lacks depth.

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