ellery_chua___singapore

too many elements too many elements fighting to be the main focus. Decide what you want to show/talk about. there is a certain amount of creative input here.

It has some merit however you need to understand it is also about what you do not show. The top left corner is irrelevant to the detail juxaposition of the 2 wall crop a bit to make this more dynamic.

 

lighting on this is nice. I have a slight take back on viewing - overally endowed set of breast and a too heavily sucked in tummy - sort of a visual big breasts on a starving body feel.

the view of the face is great - the expression and the air of mystery of seeing only one eye is very good. I think your posing of the hands and light of the hands do not add to what you have done for the face.

like the tones and colors the posing is a little off. It is not coy enough.

very creative but I suspect you could get more with a little nipple make up.

body like sculpture. nice concept very well executed. wonderful skin tones.

I like this concept. There is also that wonderful range of tone in the thumbnail. The full size view need a touch more sharpness - its a little to fuzzy right now.

Your composition is very good. For a mono the tones seem to be not exactly where they should be to complement the compo. It is hard to say for sure since in yr monitor this may be adjusted different from mine.

Runway fashion work - on location in public area of a public catwalk

show during the first year of the Singapore Fashion Week.

As an abstract of a fire works display this comes across as fresh. new. exciting. The thumbnail has it looking very very good but the larger view seems diluted down. Try nudging about density up a little.

Chuckle this is a wonderful dog portaiture shot. Definitive of that breed too.

The detail shot of the metal form work that makes up the roof of a

local landmark - The Esplanade, which was built to be a home for the

performing arts in Singapore. This is the day shot, the night shot is

in the folder too.

cute looks like a modeled landscape. Lovely color wish there was a little more texture but then the light would be different.

Mock up work for product type work.

Beautiful - like a dream sequecence shot from a movie.

 

Brooks - you said sharp layer you mean a layer for sharpening over the background layer ?

Grin typical of doggies not want to fall asleep when they are sleepy.

nice infra red picture. excellent choices on the composition.

Your frame is a little too strong - it robs attention away from your delicate still life.

nice color tone and wonderful curves.

2 strong subjects in 1 frame is normally not a good thing. Here you have diluted the impact of both. Alone the cloud scape would have been at leaast very good or excellent.

Nicely done. Good work on the metering exposure control.

Was this captured on neg or slides ? I wondering if its better the door way not be in the pic.

looks good but i feel you need to crop this. the 2 yellow color areas do nothing for your picture.

 

Danny

This can be printed 4x6 = with some post shooting work I can bring this up to a 8x12 or 8x10 beyond this there is too much loss of details.

 

Peter,

 

The frame is the visual of what this would look like matted and mounted. Without the matting there is too much bleed off since it is a high keyish sort of picture it needs a containment. That is my personal view - perhaps there is a another way to rig this up for display ?

 

 

 

Window light trial shot to test set up. Done with a 1.65mp digicam

cropped from capture, shot with crop at bottom white bath towel in

mind. Low contrast, high key type effect was the sought for target

showing the fully at peace expression that babies have.