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adam marksteiner

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  1. This image doesn't work for me. The nude torso has too many qualities of an erotic nude, great lighting, soft tones, great skin textures. In comparison the imperfections in the light direction and focus on the girl give the shot the feel of street photography or a amateur family shot. I like the concept a lot, it has great commentary on the complexities of femininity. For me the composition is just a too contrasted and it feels forced instead of natural.

    Gladiiolus

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    I love the rough textures of the boards and the smooth creamyness of the flowers. It's a very nice still life. It almost looks like the flowers are a bit out of focus but hard to tell at this size.

     

    Ice Pile

          1

    Thanks for looking, I was hoping to get more detail but the contrast

    in snow and ice is minimal but I think it makes a beautiful abstraction.

    Snow Scales

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    This rock was pounded by waves and then temperatures plumeted well

    below zero. The "scales" are a result of horfrost, caused by vapor

    from the "warm" water. Unfortunately the fog blew away and I only had

    a moment to capture this, so with no time to change to a wider lens, I

    took two images and then stitched them together to get this complete

    picture. I think it turned out well and I can not detect the stitch

    at all. Can you?

    Smoke on the water

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    I personally like this photo because at first the scene seems warm

    almost muggy with all that fog, but as you notice that the rocks are

    covered in ice and there are icicles on the right it becomes apparent

    that the air is actually frigid, and the water barely liquid.

  2. First off I would try to change the white balance so that the foam wasn't so blue looking. Also I feel that the subject could be more interesting if you narrowed the scope, perhaps if you were closer to the first stream, and maybe moved a little to the right and looked a little more down the row. In that case a narrow DOF would be beneficial, but from this perspective I feel that the wider DOF would have been beneficial because if you are going to freeze the water I think it would help if more of it were in focus.

    Untitled

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    This is my first attempt at turning a photography into a stylized

    painting. Please give me some good constructive criticism, or praise,

    if you must.

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