GerrySiegel
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A very pleasing portrait. Shows her personality. If I had any suggestion it would be that in a face shot like this it is welcome to have a little more light in the eyes, which are very dark due to the lighting. So, perhaps you might think of ways to reflect a small bit of the sun into the eye area. I like it a lot. Good work.
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A simple yet fetching pose. With very nice lighting for a figure study. Just enough facial modeling to make the gaze interesting. Well done. -
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Has a nice rythm to it. Black background. that is a matter of taste. i like to see a subject placed in a frame more defined. But this one surely works for this model. Full of life and energy. -
Simple but attractive. We have to keep our eyes open for light and patterns, good one. -
Cherene. To add a motivation and perhaps clarification if my comment and intent is misread. I love to flatter my female models ( from teen to maturity ). Not glamorize. But I will suggest make up choice and color choice and even some comment on how a piece of jewelry looks. And if a bra string is hanging out...that kind of stuff. Stay warm. Gerry
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My' preference'is expressed in my comments. To each his own style. What I do like is the open honest sweet face and I do not want to detract from the positive features you have caught Cherene. I would be pleased to have captured this young lady. ( but I might have STILL made the suggestion anyway re garment. ) I wish you well. Aloha. GS
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Has a golden glow that is most becoming. I like this shot of our young friend, John.
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Has charm. I would personally have given it a little more contrast. I can only say try different levels of contrast and see how they work out As to lighting, a little wee more modeling would not hurt, flat light is good for some purpose like a cover but I like ratioed light do you not?. Stunning appeal to eyes and her look. Cannot tell what is in back of hair, obscure object.. White dress is blinding, but eyes deserve praise, so powerful and bright...technically nice indeed..Overall is Well done.
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A cute upbeat shot of a perky miss. I do not quite get the headgear. But I am a sucker for the long striptease style gloves. Very pleasing study.
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Nice dreamy effect and the pose and garments and light are fitting same. I can only suggest that the floor is so undefined that it is hard to feel the location of same. If my point is clear. Overall very admirable. -
Just about perfect. Something for the cover of a book of images. She is a natural as well. -
Models should get a chance to relax. The window light is very pleasing. Only thing is that at my age this display of feminine loveliness does get my pulse up a bit. Seriously, enjoyable casual item as part of a shoot. I am assuming the anatomy was complete, if I may be so bold. Nice though. -
I would normally suggest trying for more illumination on her face and hair,but given her wonderful facial bones and profile, this one just works. You have a sublime touch with the female. Enjoyable portrait. -
A different kind of pose. Catches attention in a pleasing and provocative way.. nice. -
Simple and relaxing. Sometimes static is welcome. Even a horizon in middle. I like it.
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A lovely model. My impression of the lighting is that it could be more contoured, that is less flat and more directional from a main source ... Separation from background tonality would also be nice and that might take some more playing with illumination or distances or color of bgrnd. Perhaps meter bacground couple stops lower in this case... I( I bet it also shows well in color for her hair and tonality would not dissapear same way even as a high key study...aloha, gs
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I like the expression. Your skin color processing looks heavy on the yellow green, though that may be your choice. I would try to go for a more neutral flesh tone if it were my image. I wish you well.
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I think you did well. It is hard to divorce from the roman numeral tattoo. It intrigues but also detracts. She is wholesome enough with out skin art...but I can see that is judgmental yet one gets a critique which is not judgmental is elusive. I am sure that for some it adds to her character. But how, beats me. I wish you well. I like the warm glow a lot. Ah youth. For myself I would clone out the long tattoo and not blink and eye for doing it. Lovely simple study portrait. Casual and engaging. -
Captivating. If anything is a deficit it is the line of the headboard/sofa back whatever that cleaves the body so sublime and graceful. This is a rare model who holds herself in such a splendid way. Light and elfin with a touch of the sensual as well. Reminds me of Audrey Hepburn and Leslie Caron in a way..that slender dancer grace and ingenue quality that shines out as from a stage. -
A good eye. It may only be appreciated by photographers who trod the byways of a city. I like the angle and the choices you made. Including the tree trunk on the left against the buildings in the distance. A nook in the big city. Frederic Law Olmsted would approve. Big time.
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