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paul heskes

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    Beer Head...

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    Nice shot, I like the lighting, pastel shades, composition and motion blur. However the horizon is out, probably less than 1 degree, but instantly noticeable.

    Regards

    Paul

    City life

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    Very good unusual approach to what is certainly a busy, abstract street scene. However, my eyes are having difficulty finding something to stay fixed on for any length of time.

    Paul

  1. Hi Aris

    The larger version appears much sharper, on this smaller, softer version the foreground is a Little intrusive, but not so on the larger version.

    I would prefer a shallower depth of field to put more emphasis on the butterfly.

    Regards

    Paul

    Untitled

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    My first camera. Given to me by my dad when I was 11

    I would say thanks for the memory, but I fired off the shutter just yesterday to keep it in trim. I really ought to take it out in the wild more often though.

    Regards

    Paul

    Incidentally, I highly recommend that camera to anyone looking for a cheap way into 6x6 medium format (film) photography.

    A winter walk

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    A lovely winter scene Floriana, but my eye can't help being dragged up to the slightly messy and wasted space on the top of the image.

    I would consider framing it better by cropping the top down to where the branches of the trees on the left and right meet in the middle.

    Try scrolling down to hide the top part of the frame and it will give you some idea.

    Hope you don't mind my input

    Regards

    Paul

    Speed 21

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    Hi Saleem.

    I'm not sure what you have done here, whether or not you have used two images, or one image with a diffused background.

    Either way, I like the exposure, composition and lighting on the lead horseman, but, personally I would like to see a more detailed 'realistic' view on the horsemen in background, the sky is just fine.

    Regards and a happy New Year

    Paul

  2. A Medium contrast conversion to black & white from my previous upload, after a couple of members expressed a desire to see a b&w version.

    Thanks for looking and a happy New Year to all.

    Regards

    Paul

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