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    Untitled

          6

    The photograph intrigues me, it looks great but has a quality that I associate with a rendered model.

     

    keeps the attention though.

     

    Good work!

    Fashion 1

          4

    Marvelous capture and perfect exposure and framing.

     

    Great photograph.

     

    but.. Did you try to edit the red band on the right so that it does not interfere with the portrait? I find it pulls the attention away from your subject.

     

    Hope it helps,

     

    All the best,

    Kris

    Untitled

          5

    Amazing that you captured such detail with that shallow a depth of field!

     

    My personal taste goes to a bit more information but I must say this works :-)

     

    All the best,

    Kris

    anne :)

          6

    I love this portrait due to it's tonality, pose and more than anything because of the excellent use of your model's skin texture!

     

    When I looked at it 5 more seconds I found that due to the focus point on the lips and the very shallow Depth of field her right eye falls just short of being sharp! Maybe it was the intention to pull the viewer down in the photograph which is also justified :-) But it bothered me enough to nag about it here..

     

    Anyway, a very good portrait! 6/7!

     

    Kris

    Color

          6

    The brightness of the image and the radial pattern make this photograph stand out.

     

    Was it your intention to offset the handle of the umbrella to the right instead of letting it start out from the corner?

     

    Br,

    Kris

    Untitled

          3

    Great job on creating the minimalistic feeling with this photograph. Also good use of negative space!

     

    To make the impact of the image stand out more, maybe you could have aligned the photograph so that the vase would be completely upright alongside the edge.

     

    All the best,

    Kris

    Untitled

          9

    I like the delicate feel of the photograph, the composition and the structure of the foreground.

     

    If I would be nagging I could say that maybe I would have blurred the background out a bit less but that would be a pointless comment since the result is fabulous..

     

    All the best,

    Kris

    Marateca#40

          4

    I really love this photograph but cannot get out of writing that, even though I am confident it was intended, the vignette gives me the feeling that this otherwise perfect landscape photograph is not free to breathe.

     

    I think the faded reflections of the water and tonality is very well done and adds a lot of punch to the image. Since the vignette does not exist in my imagination: A6 O6 ;-)

     

    All the best.

    Kris

  1. I just wanted to say this is one very VERY good action photograph as it engages the viewer and it is almost impossible not to think about the feeling both the photographer and the pilot must have had at the moment the shot was taken!

     

    I very much admire your courage!

     

    All the best!

    Untitled

          6

    Hello Agnieszka,

     

    I feel that the contrast/brightness could be raised a little to make your model stand out more from the background, you could also try bringing another focus point into the photograph (e.g. uncover the hand from the fabric so it "shines" though the picture) That being said, I really enjoyed the the pose and backdrop you chose for this portrait, also the fabric and model look great.

     

    Hope this coment is wat you were looking for! All the best, Kris

     

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