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    Adrianne

          3

    Marcus, great light, model and skin-tones. I think your scores are not that good for this one, due to the skewed tiles and the blue cast. 

    Personally I would remove the tattoo on the arm. It takes away the innocence of the subject.

    Untitled

          3

    Tony, I can imagine, people won't like this. But I do. I like the rawness of the image. I find this the strongest shot of the series. Looking forward to more of this. Once again, great shot.

    Untitled

          5

    Previous remarks are correct calling this clever and creative. I fully agree.

    Well executed is a different story. the cloning of the sky in the first frame distracts me. in the second frame, the black at the legs. I can point out at least an other ten examples. This is a good draft, not a finished product.

    Go back to your pc and work on the details to get a truly inspiring wonderful work of art.

    Would Magritte have shown a half finished work?

    Wisdome IV

          9

    Very nice image you got here. The only thing I would have changed, is to straighten her glasses. It would increase her dignity. For me that's the difference between a 5 and a 6. Congratulations.

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          2

    I don't believe nobody gave any critique! This is a great image in so many ways. Colorfull,  the angle, the tourist bus in the background. I adore this shot.

    In the reflection of the glasses, I can see you used some fill flash, but the shadows on her face are still strong. I know why!

    You were shooting it 1/2000... your flash can't follow. You are using iso 800 in full sunlight... If you bring your iso down to 100 (or even lower), you can use your flash's sync speed (look it up, might be marked red on your camera), making the flash do something.

    Altough, technically not perfectly performed, I am in love with this image.

  1. Magdalena,

    I like the depth this image provides and you did a good thing placing the model in the shadow.

    You lost some details due to the hard Hungarian light during the day. I figured you can make it better, by underexposing at bit and using some fill flash, even the one built-in your camera.

    Framing wise, I would have left a bit less space at the top of the picture and included the model's feet.

    I think this is a decent holiday picture.

  2. Andrey I love the colors in this shot. great model. It is a pity, the shadow and dress bleed into solid black at the bottom. It would have been nice if a slight distinction was possible.

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