jennifer_catron

March 2, 2015

The florescent blown out whites are way too distracting. Correct exposure time and try again.

March 2, 2015

Light... Photography is all about light. If you don't have a decent light, then turn the subject away from the light and use the light as a hair light. This just screams ...photographer doesn't know what he's doing. ....

March 2, 2015

Cute shot, a hard time of day to do photographs.

March 2, 2015

Beautiful!

March 2, 2015

Really cute shot.

March 2, 2015

Very nice print. I love the softness of the light that matches the softness of the mood. Nice job.

March 2, 2015

Adorable shot. I love his body language and mama's hands holding on to him. Great perspective with the camera, and the black and white processing makes this really stand out emotionally.

March 2, 2015

The lighting here really makes the shadows under this baby's eyes look pretty hollow. If you want him to look sick, well you've succeeded, however move your light more in line with the camera until you can see the reflection of light in his eyes.

March 2, 2015

The lighting here is pretty awful, the HDR type processing makes the lighting stand out even more. If you're going to go through the trouble of pulling in lighting, try positioning it a little better.

March 2, 2015

Not artsy, just off. The draping on the chair looks like a pervert tried to invite a girl over to see her tail and just threw some old sheet over his basement chair.

March 2, 2015

I love this. I don't think it has any commercial value, but the shot would most likely be loved and cared for by the one in the photo. Nice work.

March 2, 2015

Gorgeous print! I think this could have a wide audience if printed correctly on the right materials.

March 2, 2015

Very commercial piece. I could see this in a Marshalls store as a print or an artist rendering on canvas. Nice piece, very usable.

March 2, 2015

This is an example of finishing.

March 2, 2015

Very nice, however it's missing the finishes. It's a strong portrait but you would never see this, in this condition ready for print. Finishing means you take out the hot spots etc and finish it ready for magazine which I do believe with the finishing touches that it could be magazine ready. Very editorial.

March 2, 2015

Excellent black and white. To take this up a notch I would have put an off camera light on the woman in the back, or taken her out of the shot completely. The print would have been strong either way. Great composition. You could have even gone closer in with your foreground, but lovely no matter.

March 2, 2015

Nice exposure. The light is a little too direct and harsh, but the composition somewhat makes up for that with it's 1/3 composition.

March 2, 2015

This has a very Ansel Adams thing going on. Nice exposure. I would have liked to see a bit more detail in the bottom shadow, but nice.

November 26, 2014

I exposed for the foreground. Im not huge on flash, even fill flash. I would rather shoot as natural as possible. Did I purposely think about the background, not really. However, I did purposely expose her face properly.