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fujimike

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  1. I can realise this must have been quite difficult since they are very shy. Unfortunately the antelope is not sharp enough and the colours and contrast are a little bland. Good effort though
  2. Amazing original shot. 7/7. May i ask how an earth were you able to include almost pin point sharp stars in the image without over-exposing the structure? which looks like a spaceship hovering in deep space to me. Excellent!
  3. I like the foreground which shows good colours and a good sense of movement but the sky looks too pale and washed out lacking clarity and detail. I also think the composition could be improved on to make the whole shot worth looking at. Possibly position the camera further back with a stronger dof but i would need to be there.

    Foggy Morning

          5
    A lovely soft image with the sun diffused behind the mist. The small groups of trees really make this shot. I can see that you wanted to break up that negative space with the over-hanging branches but myself would prefer a closer range shot without them. Definately a 6/6

    Untitled

          5
    The sky is excellent and so timing very good. Foreground is interesting but my only criticism is that the forground composition is a little messy. However 6/6

    Evening light

          8
    I know what you mean! I find shots looking directly at the sun a great challenge and so waited for the sun to be low in the sky on this one and diffused it behind the tree. Thanks for comments
  4. Thanks very much. Just to confirm i never manipulate my shots. Dont use HDR or the like only slight tweeking of levels in raw. Got a lucky break in the clouds on this one.

    Evening light.

          13
    Excellent composition and timing with the sun. I like the way the cyclist rides into the shot. My only criticism is that the distant horizon beneath the sun is not quite level and only really noticeable viewing large.
  5. From a glance it looks wonderful and the composition and timing is good. My criticism is that there is too much foreground blur and too much HDR treatment which is producing a computer/cartoon like image.
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