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paul_de_ley

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    Smoke Wings

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    Have been experimenting for a few mornings with various lenses, isos

    and shutter speeds to catch the effects of dawn backlighting on

    hummingbirds coming in for an early drink. No flash involved but I

    added a 10mm macro ring to get closer with my non-macro 300mm.

    Untitled

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    Great composition capturing a small tragedy! A minor tweak could be to increase foreground dof (what body and lens did you use? increase iso and stop down to f11 or f16?) and/or pluck out the taller blade of grass covering the cheek
  1. Excellent focus and nice composition! The highlights in the face and the dark tones look just a little washed out, try adjusting levels and/or the ends of the curve a little. A tighter crop showing only the owl could also be interesting.

    atack

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    Nice focus on the egg! Would have been perfect if the eyes of the wasp on the left could have been in focus too.
  2. Hi Michael, I would suggest a slight reduction in overall brightness and a more pronounced deepening of the darker tones by shifting the lowest point in "curves" or the median slider in "levels". The focus on the bird is excellent. Composition-wise the pose suggests a portrait orientation of the image would have been even better, or a square crop evenly centering the bird.

    Spotted Towhee

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    These guys hardly ever come out in the open so I like this as a habitat pose, and a slightly tighter crop would have emphasized even better the interesting "expression" created by the black cap, red eye and tilted beak like. I agree with William that the image looks too sharpened though, and maybe also the -1.3 exposure compensation on the camera and/or lower end of the tone curve on computer were pushed a little too far for comfort.

    Secrets

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    Striking and scary! The ?-shaped reflection of the keyhole's silhouette in the pupil provides an extra touch of the mysterious.
  3. An opportunity shot through the window. I had just come back inside the house after giving

    my manual focus Tamron 500mm mirror lens a spin in the backyard to see how well it could

    do handheld on my Sony A100 with image stabilization on.

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