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mark_hanegraaff

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    Untitled

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    To be honest, I'm not really crazy about it, but the rest of your portfolio is pretty snappy. Judging by the ratings for this picture I'm definitively in the minority, so I won't argue with that.
  1. It's an interesting twist on the canyon series. The light beams coming down are nice, but for some reason they seem distracting. I'm not sure how I would have done it differently. The areas where the light blows out are pretty good too.

    Worker Bee

          4
    I was taking the same exact type of pictures today. If it helps, I found that the only time this setup starts to look interesting is when the bee is still in midflight, but near the flower.
  2. I think the idea is good, but the model looks emotionless. was that the intention? Maybe scared or in pain might have been better. I'm not sure. The lighting I do like. If the arm had been in focus, or had it showed some motion bur instead that would have been nice too.

    ENA

          11
    Technically speaking this shot is excellent, but lipstick and makeup on a child this young looks strange to me. It takes away the feeling of innocence from the picture.
  3. Night shots are one of my favorites. The only advice I can give is not set white balance if you're shooting RAW (do that in PS later), but set the white balance very carefully if you're shooting Jpeg otherwise the colors will look strange and harder to adjust. There is a ton of stuff out there on doing night shots, so there plenty to read up on.

    T-33

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    I guess a more intereting sky would have helped. It's not a bad picture, just a ordinary I guess. I have that problem too, so I'm not trying to sound insulting.

    City (2)

          8
    The anonymous ratings give this picture no justice. It's a good capture especially with the moving train above it. I bet it would have looked better if the guy looked more visibly annoyed. He looks like he's just posing.
  4. I like the light source coming from the top. It would have been nice if the shilouette of the player had been more defined, but without a light coming from the back it would be hard to achieve.

    Untitled

          7
    definitively a good shot. The angle and the pose are what make it. A little more fill to eliminate the shadows behind the model would have made it even better.
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