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Ben Aan, Loch Lomond and the Trossachs National Park, Scotland
View from the top of Ben Aan (455m) You can see Loch Katrine and Ben
Venue (737m) on the left.
It's been a while since I posted anything here but I wanted to share
some of my recent work with a larger PN audience. This is another
attempt to photograph this location - which I must admit offers
excellent views for its relatively tiny altitude. Hope you'll like it.
Please have a look at the larger version. Your comments/critiques much
appreciated.
Piotr
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No offense Tony - but the main photo looks ... quite horrible to me !!
All I can say is that you've gone a step too far playing with saturation sliders and basically "butchered" quite a nice scene.
It certainly has a "WOW" factor, but ... it's that kind of a wow you ... don't really need.
Composition-wise I think there is too much emphasis on the grass foreground. I would personally prefer a bit more water with that gorgeous reflections on it.
Just a thought really !
Cheers
Piotr
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Hi Lester.
Very relaxing view.
Nice and effective composition, but the color saturation (blues especially) is way over the top for me. Look what happened to that mountain in the background.
I would simply suggest to be a bit more "realistic" when playing with the sliders.
Regards
Piotr
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Ryan
I'm sure you are aware of number of different ways you could do this.
One of the simplest (and quickest) way would be to apply the (Hue/Saturation) adjustment layer, select Blues only (alt+7) and move the saturation slider to suit your taste.
Also - you might want to select "Color" blending mode - just to leave the overall contrast untouched.
I've attached a screenshot to demonstrate what I'm talking about.
Hope that helps
Piotr
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Very painting-like.
Simple, but very effective composition.
Lovely light and colors.
You could probably apply a bit more sharpening here, but that's just a nit ;)
Cheers
Piotr
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Wow !
I know this spectacle is amazing and there are plenty of similar shots here on PN, but this is nothing but excellent.
Beautiful capture and very good exposure handling.
Everything just works here.
Piotr
PS. Hope you had some spare gloves :)
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Simple. but very effective composition.
Gorgeous light and lovely 3-D "feel" due to that waving landscape.
Not quite sure about that blue cast on the snow (you could try and desaturate it a bit), but ... it's nothing really major.
Cheers
Piotr
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Kevin
Lovely scene and some amazing light you've captured here (beautiful glow around the waterfall).
Composition-wise it's a very good idea you've decided for a square crop. Everything here balances itself in your frame.
I would only move the main subject (the waterfall of course) closer to the lower-left corner and leave a bit more sky in the upper-right one. In that way it would be even more "striking" and you would place your waterfall in a stronger focal point.
Finally - my other criticism is to do with the exposure handling. You've done a very good job with almost entire frame, but sadly the sky is pretty much burnt-out (which is a bit of a shame).
Not sure whether it was a single exposure or whether you've used any filters here, but I'll try to see if you could do something about it.
All in all - it's a lovely view and definitely worth a flawless execution.
Hope that helps
Cheers
Piotr
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John
Stitching a panorama can often be a very tricky one. Manual exposure (locked for all individual shots is a must, but that's just a part of the story (a beginning)).
Most important thing is to keep your camera leveled and make sure you've left enough overlap between individual shots.
It also matters what focal length you're shooting at - as coming close to wide angle introduces some nasty distortions (which you can partly eliminate by leaving larger overlaps).
Compact cameras like your G11 shouldn't, however, suffer from this problem as it is mostly an issue with SLR/DSLR's and using some really wide angle lenses.
Needless to say you could always try and shoot in portrait mode rather than in typical "landscape". What you get in return is less distortion (i.e. in the middle of your frame, where your water line etc. lies) and more pixels to work with (bigger prints etc.).
Finally - your stitching software is another key-thing. I, myself, am a PTGui fan as this is a really amazing piece of a software. It lets you control almost every single step in your stitching job. Most of the time it can work everything out with just a single click, but if you happen to find some issues with curvy horizon or similar you can always define so-called "control points" so your final stitch is simply flawless.
More to read on -> http://www.ptgui.com/
Coming back to your shot I think it's a very lovely scene.
Composition wise I think you've left too much of a left side (I would personally crop about 1/5 from the left). Also - I'm not quite sure about the sky color. It's just too red-yellow'y to my taste :]
Apart from that - very good job John
Cheers
Piotr
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Really nice shot. Great atmosphere and execution.
Cow-characters bring a lot to this shot and the positioning of all main elements is perfect.
I only wish you uploaded a larger size version :)
Cheers
Piotr
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Lovely scene and colors. Composition-wise it is also very good, although I would personally prefer a little bit more of a foreground (just a bit).
Good exposure handling and thankfully it doesn't look too artificial (like many modern HDR's)
My only criticism is to do with the saturation of the green grass in the foreground. It's a bit over the top to my taste - but that's just a minor thing :)
Cheers
Piotr
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Definitely a lovely place to be and a very nice object itself to be photographed. Not quite sure about the proportions (sky:foreground) as it is close to 50:50, which in my opinion is a bit too static.
I wish you left a bit more foreground - as the crushing waves introduce some "drama" and "freshness" into this shot.
Another element worth slight tweaking are the clouds. With just a subtle dodge/burn or some other local contrast adjustment you can achieve more 3D-type effect.
Hope that helps
Cheers
Piotr
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Famous Glen Coe (aka "Glen of the Weeping") in Winter. Please view
large ! Your comments/critiques much appreciated.
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Wow - what a nice spectacle !!!
Great light and very nice water movement.
Cheers
Piotr
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Very peaceful and nice looking composition.
Definitely looks like a painting
Composition-wise I must say I like it
There is some simplicity in this shot that is pretty enchanting.
On the technical side, however, it's not so great.
First of all - one can feel artificial HDR look from this shot.
Reflection on the water is too bright, too blue (ish) and too distracting.
I would slightly reduce saturation in this area so the whole scene gets a more natural look.
Also - your shot needs a bit more sharpening to my taste.
Otherwise - good work
Cheers - Piotr
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Very nice, atmospheric shot.
Interesting patterns in the foreground.
I would also consider cropping it to the square format (leaving just the left side)
Regards - Piotr
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This year UK experienced the coldest winter in 40 years. Finally, I
must say !!! - as I have been waiting patiently for about 5 years to
experience such beautiful scenery.
There have always been some other factors and problems coming my way
(bad timing, poor winter etc.) This time I was finally well rewarded.
Temperature that morning was around -20 degC. Well, personally
speaking such a temperature doesn’t impress me at all, as I am used to
cope with much colder conditions. Needless to say it was a very good
test for all my camera system. It was so cold that the grease in my
geared head had frozen, my cable release (loosely wrapped around the
camera) stayed in that position for most of the morning, freshly
charged batteries were losing capacity like crazy and even my simple
spirit level had some obvious delay in its normal action
The whole place (which is normally a huge swamp) was was dead frozen
and perfectly walkable/accessible without the need of inflatable boat
and a pair of good wellies :)
Please have a look at the larger version !
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As many of you have most likely seen the news - this year UK experienced
probably the coldest winter in 40 years.
Well, finally, I must say!!!
On a very snowy Thursday I completely ignored all the communication chaos
and government suggestions (advising on traveling to Scotland only if it
was a matter of life and death) and jumped on the first train to Glasgow.
I must admit I have been waiting patiently for about 5 years to experience
such beautiful winter scenery. There have always been some other factors
and problems coming my way (bad timing, poor winter etc.)
This time I was finally well rewarded.
Temperature that morning was around -20 degC. Well, personally speaking
such a temperature doesn’t impress me at all, as I am used to cope with
much colder conditions. Needless to say it was a very good test for all my
camera system. It was so cold that the grease in my geared head had
frozen,
my cable release (loosely wrapped around the camera) stayed in that
position for most of the morning, freshly charged batteries were losing
capacity like crazy and even my simple spirit level had some obvious delay
in its normal action
Composition-wise I was finally able to come up with a fresh perspective as
the whole place was dead frozen.
What is normally a huge swamp was perfectly walkable/accessible without
the need of inflatable boat and a pair of good wellies :)
Please have a look at the larger version !
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Well - I like this one even more.
Very nice composition - and this little shoreline in the lower right corner nicely drags my eye into the scene.
Again - I would suggest some minor improvements like fixing the blueish cast and maybe darkening the lower part a little bit.
Anyway - very nice place and a good shot.
Regards, Piotr
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The place itself is really amazing, but the photo needs a few finishing touches.
First of all - the filtering is too obvious and visible - especially if you compare sky with its reflection. Few simple adjustments (i.e. curves, levels) and you can easily fix this.
Next thing is the sky itself. Too much of post-processing (i.e saturation boost - that's my guess) resulted in some unnatural look and some nasty blueish cast.
Try to fix all the above and you'll have a really nice shot
Regards, Piotr
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Hi Daniel
First of all - thank you for your time to leave your comment. I'm glad you like the photo.
I cannot agree with you on the tilted horizon issue. Believe or not, but I am extremely fussy about that matter and virtually every photo in my portfolio was taken with a spirit level (one or even more) properly checked and adjusted. It just costs you a little bit of time in the field, but saves much more later with post-processing.
I also know that this little devise can sometimes be a bit tricky - so I carefully check every photo for that matter anyway.
In this case you can see the reflected mountain being literally perpendicular to itself (which proves to me that no serious tilt has occurred). What can be quite misleading is the shoreline, which is quite non-linear and causes optical illusion to the viewer.
Hope it clarifies that thing a little bit
Piotr
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Very well executed
Nice, pastel colors and well balanced composition
Good exposure handling, too :)
Regards, Piotr
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Beautiful, minimalistic composition. I can almost feel some .... ethereal feel to this shot. Perfectly executed (exposure-wise) etc. too. Have you considered cropping it to a panoramic format ? I guess it would work really well. Cheers, Piotr