jim_orr

Please take time to critique my Senior Rep Samantha. Thanks

Great shot! If the top dogs head/eyes were a bit sharper this would be perfect, but this is great.

It worked out well. Possibly a little more light on her face to even out the shadows would be better. Overall a good job.

Thanks for any suggestions

The lighting is all wrong. Her face is way too dark and also it is a bit too photoshopped. Nice model though. Keep trying.

Shot the t ball game with the in camera saturation pumped way up. Is

it too saturated or still OK?

I dont mind the tracks as much as the dress is totally blown out. Otherwish great DOF and unique shot

Should this be submitted to Starbucks for advertising?? Happy Holidays

Does this glow work?

Thanks for any feedback for improvement

Thanks for input. I really want any help if this needs improvement,

so please take the time to look and respond. Its hard getting

feedback on this site.

THanks for some good feedback please

Certainly a beautiful bride. I just read your information and see you dont have PS. Most of your pics need a little "tune up" as they are over exposed or the color is off. This shot looks too blue and needs that pulled out as well as a exposure/contrast adjustment. I tweaked it a bit and turned it B/W and it looks amazing. I just try and imagine what a bride would say as she was looking at the picture, and without these adjustments, she may say, eh, these are OK. You dont need the full 600.00 CS3 to make these adjustments, so I really recommend using something like PS Elements. Pics are great, just in need of some minor but important adjustments

Jim

Good photo, great pose. I would suggest a closer crop because there is so much of "everything else" and the couple is secondary. Then possibly some sharpening as their faces look a little blurry.

Hope this helps

Jim

The background is not really good and the dress is so overexposed there is no detail in it.

It is really too out of focus, and it looks like you just cropped her out of a shot that she didnt know she was supposed to be in. Step back a little and engage her a little. Use a bounce flash to help freeze everything and sharpen up the photo.

Very well lit and very sharp. I think you did a great job with this portrait!

Thanks for feedback, I really want to become proficient so please

give me some constructive criticism on my photos. Thanks

Thanks for helping me improve with suggestions. I was wondering about

the removal of the tatoos or leaving them as is.

I got a 3-3. Was wondering how this is such a bad photo?

well done and a very cute little guy. I have one probably the same age.

Her back is Waaay over blown. A diffuser would have helped here.

Posing for over seas Father to be.

Great photo, maybe blur the foot a little. I am not a fan of the weird squiggly design on the mat. That distracts from the rest.

Thanks for looking and any suggestions for improvenent welcome!

Thanks

Jim