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  1. I like the existential feel without the goal post...the man bent over with headphones is a very strong image and the road ahead goes on and on but he doesn't notice...there is no goal, the goal post is illusory...if you are very attached to the goal post you could try and layer it in much lighter like vapor...

    Thank you very much for your comment...I think the ratings on this site are interesting but I don't know what they mean..it's all so subjective...

    Chess

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    First, I wanted to thank you for your interesting comment on Primary World. I may play with it a bit tho I am basically happy with the foto. All works are works in progress as we useta say in the poetry scene...

    I like the lens choice here and the B&W...very well done!

    Inversion

          6

    As you can tell I'm no purist...thanks for your critique.

    I like the color and whoosh of cloud like a contrail..the tree leans nicely towards it. I think I want to crop more of the landscape out leaving the whoosh like a bolt of lightning about to strike the tree...

  2. Thank you for any comments.

    This is actually one part of a Dyptych where the second foto is

    flipped so that the open portions of the swing set face each other

    and the colors are reversed.

    Tin God

          5
    Very strong presence but I would like to see more contrast between the sculpture and the sky,,,possibilities might be to accent the figure or lighten and heighten contrast on the sky...but ,as they say, that's my style...

    Man & Beach

          10
    This has a wonderful eerieness and surreal feel...I like it very much..The person is off to the side,small within a greater environment which is more intriguing than the usual...I like the grain,texture...
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