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hugo verboven

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  1. I looked at this photograph and wondered if this really was what you intended because of the lights far to the right in the picture in stead of more to the middle, funny that that is exactly what you commented. It might be an idea to make this shot 'for real', and reserve a bit more space for the automobile's lights gone crazy, they contrast very nicely with the blue sky. Would you consider a new try?

    Hugo

    work5

          19

    This is a very original portret. I gave it only a 5/6 rating because I would have liked to have seen a bit of your nose. Seeing the rest of your lovely features I can't believe it's not nice enough to be shown as well. I will look at your portpolio to see if I'm right. The border treatment is not my style.

    Hugo

    I'm Lovely

          15

    Nice model, interesting shot. Her face looks remarkable and makes this picture.

    I still would like to remark the following. The background is not my cup of tea, I would have liked a more natural backdrop. Her left shoulder/arm is a bit too light in comparison with the rest of the image, especially her belly. Her arm looks a bit strange, with a lot of tension, being cut off at the bottom enlarges this. Hugo

  2. I personally think the treatment is a bit overdone. Unfortunately the boundary between the background and the foreground is not sharp enough, part of the news stand isn't sharp now, the same goes for the lantern and the plant on the right side. Maybe a different kind of blur would have given a nicer effect? It is a cool idea to focus the attention on the news stand, though.

    Hugo

    Untitled

          6

    Cool idea, I find the black area a bit to much though. Zooming in a bit more (or cropping) would have inmproved the shot in my opinion.

    Hugo

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