james_frater

Yes, the image on the phone should be larger and more easily viewed. I am thinking it was your task to have the mobile phone image sharp and the focal point of the picture, this did not work.

I think the image on the mobile phone needed to take up at least 1/5th of the whole image.

It's a good idea, but it did not technically work out. And I am not sure the use of flash the way you did it, did much for the overall effect of the image.

I like this image, if there was a bit more light detail on the left, I would hang it on my wall.

Some look at images and want to see models, sexy models, the glamour pin ups.

 

I enjoy seeing the pretty people but after a while I look for more. These women know their not models, but I bet felt sexy posing.

 

I for one want to see more images like this. Not so much abstract though. Simple poses for simply beautiful women in their own right.

I like the shot, I like the belly. How about the rest of your body ?

To me the person is upsdide down, but the cross is still the correct way up, and is bordering just on a cross at that. Rather than any Religious significance, looks more like some Bondage shot.

 

For me the shot comes across as sex not religion.

 

 

I think most of your images require some post processing. Brightness, contrast, color have not been corrected yet

Very deep colors, but I think the model is underexposed

I love these types of shots, one question, was it making the image smaller that lost the sharpness. Or was it soft at original image?

Because if it is pin sharp, then you have a world class winner

A striking image. My only comment is that it seems cold.

 

I for one if I was going to be alone and nude on a beach, I would do it in the glowing evening of the setting sun under warm tones.

I love these kind of shots, and always look classic in B&W.

 

I would ask what you would think about doing some digital editing on the image? The reflection in the light over her head showing that bright highlight you could clone out.

Maybe try cloning out the right hand side window frame to make it look like a full wall.

It would make the image look more simple, still remain elegant.

But excellent work.

 

Looking at your other images, they are simple compositions, excellent images.

 

However

 

This is very crowded, confusing.

I am not sure what I am suppose to think looking at this image. Is it pain, or is she just telling you to get lost and not take a picture of her.

 

Yep, I am sitting here and nodding approval, I like this image.

I think out of your images this one I like the best. I would have tried to avoid the slight gap on the left hand edge, but that is just me and once again pin sharp face I would have prefered.