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Unique and artistic, good idea Cristi!

I really like the idea of this shot. In my opinion, it would be improved if the phone screen was much closer so that the image on it was more viewable. Cheers!

I agree with Anthony, very clever shot, you can't not look at it, bravo :)

very good ideea!

On the contrary, I think the shot is rather pointless as well as technically mediocre. Since you asked, sorry.

Yes, the image on the phone should be larger and more easily viewed. I am thinking it was your task to have the mobile phone image sharp and the focal point of the picture, this did not work.

I think the image on the mobile phone needed to take up at least 1/5th of the whole image.

It's a good idea, but it did not technically work out. And I am not sure the use of flash the way you did it, did much for the overall effect of the image.

Cristi, this one immediately caught my eye. I think it's novel and well composed. Very tantalising and makes us want to see the lovely girl in focus. I reckon a straight photo of her just as she is posed on the car would be a winner too. Well done. Kind regards, Neil

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