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sully

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    Under GOD'S Eyes

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    Good Intrique to this photo. You don't ususally see those sleeping on the street with blindfolds over their eyes and their clothes are usually more tattered. Is it a documentary photo or did you plan this?
  1. Monika, this is a nice portrait. Good tonal range from the white to black. Her eyes tell me she is a strong woman. I like the crop. I don't know what to do about the hand but it is the only thing I could think to suggest which might be improved.

    Fountain Fun

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    Cliff, I think you have captured a great moment. It is fun to view. I think the quality detracts from the shot. To me, the shot looks oversharpened. I think it may work better as a tighter crop. I toyed with vertical and horizontal crops and I am not sure what works better. I think you need to bring more focus to the center of the action. I realize you would be giving up some of the spray of the fountain which I am a little torn on. I think at a minimum you could crop the bottom 25% and it would improve the shot. Just my thoughts for your consideration.

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  2. Eliseo, I think this is close to being a good shot but it comes up a little short. I don't think the grass adds to the quality of the overall composition. I think it detracts from the rest of the scene which is quite beautiful and peaceful.

    Surfer Babe

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    Great capture. I think the crop would be better if you placed her on the left third. That way she would be surfing into the shot vs. out the right side. Otherwise a nice photo.

    Untitled

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    I think this is a nice shot. Great mood. Did you manipulate the color? I'm wondering how it would look if the boats were more white than blue.
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