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k-lys

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  1. The composition is classic, but the windows at the end of the "nef" are cuted, wich is a pity...

    The major problem, according to me, is the exposure... tu windows are overwashed... Maybe you should have done exposure with a spot on the windows...

    woodline

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    Generally, the major defect of PN, according to me of course, is the taste there is here for over-PSed picture, dramatic lights, colors, stauration and effects...

     

    But on this picture and the rest of your folio, it works quite good...

     

    How do you PS your picture?

    Untitled

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    Pas trop tot... C en etait limite a se demander si tu avais le temps de faire autre chose que des chalets en bois...

     

    Juste un petit detail sur l horizon qui semble pencher vers la droite, non?

    what?!?

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    Simple, academic... but it works... Congrats. I would probably have placed the head of the frog at the crossing of the horizontal and vertical thirds, but...

    Untitled

          3

    Welll... to be sincere, the problem with this kind of picture is that they are overdone, wich make quite hard to be original...

     

    You ll maybe find it too conventionnal, but I think a third rule would have worked better

     

    - horizontaly for the water line

    - verticaly for the place of the ship

     

    And the light coming from the left makes an overexposed area... and a big shadow on the center...

     

    I hate to become comments the way I leave you... i always think "Don t tell me what you would have done if you were behind the camera"

     

     

    I m sorry for that... Hope you ll understand...

  2. I agree with the two comments... The mood and colors are great, but I would have excentrated the cross on the first plan... just to balance a bit the composition... Or maybe would have choosen a square format, croping the right of the picture...
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