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    James I, 2000

          3

    He is also a photographer and was kind enough to be patient while I

    fiddled. I'm not sure LF is the way to go for portraits, but I think

    this one came out alright.

     

    Thoughts? Suggestions?

  1. I don't mind being rated low, but if you are inclined to bother with a 1/1 rating, then please give some constructive suggestions regarding what you think needs fixing (or avoiding next time).

     

    Thank you.

     

    BTW, Thanks Twyla, it was a really lovely evening, wish we could have sat in that sun-room. It was closed for a private party.

    Gumball

          6

    I love the tension of the open yellow space to the criss/crossing stripes of the chairs.

     

    It strangely forms a diagonal that keeps me motivated to look at the details. Much more than if the wall were busier.

     

    The only thing I found distracting was the white section of wall on the left, but there isn't an easy solution (since cropping it out eliminates too much other good stuff. So, without moving the chairs and gumball machines 1 ft to the left, great photo!

     

    (bonus) The color saturation and eveness of the tone makes the designer in me giddy. Nice work. 6/6

    evening on Kodiak

          5

    Strong directional composition, great color. The mass on the left looms a little bit more than I would normally like in a light morning/sunset scene, but it seems to work here.

     

    Did I already say great color? It has tremendous subtlety(sp?), nicely done.

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