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    Livery at Bodie

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    Sorry I forgot to initialize that option. I am not interested in ratings, I can't cash it anywhere ;). I prefer to hear critique and your thoughts on the image and any way to improve it.

    Thanks.

    Summer Dream

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    Very interesting framing and shot. I think for the sequence to be meaningful, the middle shot should be to the left and the left one in the middle. Great work.
  1. Soft light bathe the calcium carbonate pinnacles of ancient Lake

    Searles in Southern California. These formations are also known as

    the Cathedral City. Pano cropped from a 4x5 transparency.

  2. There are some merits in the composition but quite mediocre in the end like a poorly finished digital art. I think there is a lot of disparity in the density of dust from foreground to background. They seem to be overly manipulated and doesn't convey natural distance attenuation well. It feels like some of the dust is added with a airbrush or un-naturally enhanced.
  3. I was invited by a friend to shoot the Bradbury Building last

    weekend. This architectural gem of warm sandstone and cast-iron

    filigree was a visual splendour, bathed in soft light from the glass

    ceiling. Built in 1893 in downtown Los Angeles by mining tycoon Louis

    Bradbury, it has been featured in quite a number of films like Blade

    Runner, D.O.A,, Double Indemnity etc. In Blade Runner, there was a

    very moody shot of the interior as a young Darryl Hannah enters the

    building while the blimp could be seen through the atrium glass

    ceiling overhead. When I got to the 4th floor, I remembered the

    hallway and the unique design of the cast iron work. Anyway, I was

    too overwhelmed to have done the place justice and will have to go

    back to shoot again, with more care, another day. This was my first

    serious attempt at architectural photography with LF and I think I

    did badly.

     

    Shot in Large Format with Schneider 80mm SS lens. F/22 @ 1 second.

  4. It's a good attempt in capturing a solemn mood, even though the caption says End of Winter. Sorry about the Cokin ND grad mishap. It did not turn out to be a happy accident. Perhaps you can selectively color correct the magenta cast in the sky and show a little less of the sky. The image is very nice otherwise. I like the limited palette of the bottom half a lot.
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