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Thanks for the comments. The shoulder wasn't dodged nor burned, the challenge I had was that the background was about mid-gray, to level it down, I have to give up about 1/4 of the recorded dynamic range, I think.

Skin tune is something I'll try on bodyscape next time. Thanks and regards.

Thank you for cleaning up the white spots, good job. I will use it if you don't mind. I didn't do touch up to the original photo. Warm regards.

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Translation to Jose's comments:

Very good photo, but I found the "white spots" in the deep background distracting.

There is no category for glamour, but this is not a fashion shot, nor

a nude. Your comments are most welcome and always appreciated. Thanks.

This is a retry. Thanks in advance.

Special thanks go to those who made kind comments on the previous

version. :D

I think it may give more impact if you used a wide angle shooting on the left lower side. That strip of mountain, almost like a "merger" in photo composition, should be avoided, imho.

I don't speak French either, but I guess it means "down with (or say no to) TGV and Fascism". Interesting parallel -- back then fascists did make trains run on time. Did you take TGV?