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focus mankind

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    Untitled

          8

    this is just great - i like the composition having her on the light side - combined with the columns it give a great balance - not boring at all.

    I'd wish to met her at that very place!

    Untitled

          14

    Hands are beautyful - yes.

    A subject that has been captured so many times, that one could think, no other creative shot is possible. But, as I see...

    ... somebody gets another creative and outstanding shot on that topic...

    ... you did it - congrats.

    Ozzy Land

          11

    It's just perfect - timing/composition and the colors - creativity.

    I wonder how it looked liked, when the female would had covered the sun...

    congrats to that shot.

     

    Passion

          2

    I like it from a compositon point of view, may I'd thought about the following, which might improve:

    subject (the tattoo) draws the attention of the viewer. Since it's near of the woman's eye - it's conflicting (is it about her face or about the tatoo or the hand.

    I think - I'd preferred that she would have stand on the right side of him.

    May her hand would point to the tatoo (now the hand guides to the "emptiness" of the photo).

    All in all I like it - but I think it could be improved (may cut the right side away (about 1/4) - may guides the view of the viewer better to the subject.

    Hope, you're fine with this critique - as said - it's a strong composition.

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