longtang_lin

very original... please try more..

Longtang Lin

very original!!.. great idea.. I prefer the teh color to be slightly subtle...

it convience more..

Congraduations..

LOngtang John Lin

teh wind is blowing.. teh girl is in motion, and still teh picture is so sharp!!.

Gee.. that is incredible... I miss million of good shot like this suffering slow exposure time..

You must have good strong artificial light..

Congraduation..

Longtang John Lin

The beauty, face, exprerssion, lighting,,, everything coem into good place / combination.. especially the teh feet is magic.. it bring the good photo into 7/7 catalogy..

Congraduation...

Longtang Lin

PS the title mean ??

Liu :

1. yes absolutely,, this model is so so so sweet !!!! and you catch her wonderfully.. I saw the original version , while I rate uit very high then.. so I know this is a montage photo..

2. suggestion.. overall contrast is good to bring a soft warming feeling, but I suggest you do the following to enhance the photo to even \higher level..

A, use mask to hide/reveal the overlay.. reveal the eye more and gradually hide other section,, so we will have a focus point.

B. You may hide some of the flower projection on her face,.. it is too big too much, which bring distratiion. (at least soften its effect)

C. there is something lighting near her ear ??? i can not tell ,, but please removbe it..

D. you may even "bend./distore/ delete / add " some portion of teh overlay flower, so it will further intergrate with the girl.. It is time consuming,, but it worth trying.. It is funny taht in photoshop you may order how teh flower grow.

I do that a lot.. :-)

I think this photo is a potential masteropiece with further fine tuning..

Good luck...

Longtang John Lin

very original and wonderful color management..

John Lin

wow..

This one have all of teh incrediant for a good photo..

Good model. expression, composition , color and background is clean .. excellent light too..

I am jealous ... How did you convience them to pose for you ??? They are almost professional. who donot show tention on their face..

Longtang john Lin

very good contrast between teh red and white, but I hope that cra baground to dispaera

Good phoro indeed

John LIN

sometimes, I am confused with the rating system.. I think this is the best portrait in this week, but it still "bury" here.. I saw a whole bunch of so so photo rating much higher than this .... why ?

This one has color . composition. eye. expression. detail . texture. lighting . all of the good ingredients for a photo.. why this one is not on the top ??? Although appreictaion if beauty art is not objective,, but I should not be that far off ??.. I guess..

I need to give 7/7 here..

Congraduations... Please show us more..

Longtang John Lin

this is a wonderful model.. 1st rated..

and you catch her well//

Longtang John Lin

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creative frame..

seamless montage of all elements and colors

i do not like the lower brigh grass . the brigt part drw attention away from main subject, but di not dd too much to his image.

since the photo is so original,, i still give 7/7..

longtang john lin

this is one of the best montage photo ever seen in p/n

longtang lin

is i beautiful light!!!!

longtang john lin

very intresteed..

longtang john lin

??very clean imagine..

montage photo , and lots of PS work.. I guess,, but yo do it wonderfully..

good composition

LONGTANG JOHN LIN

very creative use of light..

Longtang John Lin

the image is too strojmg to my personal taste.. but your PS skill is absoltely wonderful !! (sky/rail grass..

the touch is perfcet )

Longtang John Lin

lovely !!.her eye color shoem through..

Longtang John Lin

wonderful shot ,, perfect idea and execution..

the mesh reall y bring the whole scene together

another idea is to put her in diagonal direction and closed up???

Congraduations..

Longatng johN lIN

very very impressive for an "un-manipulated " photo.. why not just do soem photoshop to make it masterpiece.. this one has great potential !!!

Longtang John Lin

oh.. this is a fresh wonderful idea.. !!!!!!!

suggetsion..

crop bottom just a little bit (more focus)

the dust texture is simply wonderful !!!!!! but you overdo it.. If you could tune the effect down just a little bit (over-sharpen) , which can bring naturalism to it.. that will be even better ..

too bad her eye is not lighted up.. or it will be a great focal point ..

Still this is a very good execution and excellent lighting,, just a little bit of adjustment will bring it to 7/7 artwork level..

looking forward to see more of you work..

LONGTANG JOHN LIN

I saw this as teh best original among your 3 photos.. but the hair is blocked her eyes... otherwsie it should be a 7/7 photo..

Still it is a fresh wonderful artwork..

LONGTANG JOHN LIN

SUCH AN ELEGANT MODEL.. AND YOU CATCH HER WELL... i ALWAYS WISH TO HAVE ONE LIKE THIS..

Longtang John Lin

WONDERFUL COMPOSITION AND COLOR AND OVERLAY..

longtang john lin